Rose cooper wins! Thanks!~

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

Im oober bored so ya , 5 millon vpc giveaway. Awnser questions below in each categroy to qualify for the whole 5 mill. For just 1 mill or two mill, only awnser one catergorys questions! Category 1- 1 mill What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality) eg. Eyes, humor, nose, shyness ect Whats a pet peeve you dont expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? eg-Fuzzy Peaches (real pet peeve of my mothers lol) Whats your favorite part in a person? eg. humor, kindness ect Category 2- 2 mill What do you love about your family, and hate? Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) Whats a talent you have that your proud of? Category 3- 3 mill Read this passege and tell me what you think you know about this charecter. Passege one- I gazed at the blood flow, slowly gliding down the edge of the knife as I splashed it into the vile. Hate enraged through my vanes as I held the tiny bottle between my fingers. My children-gone. My lover-gone. My life-gone. Fire spread through my skin, I chould feel my face flushing And as that hate took over my very soul, I dropped the bottle and wached it slowly shatter of the icy pathway. Mark stared at the splatterd blood, engraged at my lack of self control. I on the other hand, grinned. My hate was settling, and my craving for revenge had finally settled. I admired my work, the last drop of blood of the enimie I shall ever see. "How dare you!" Hollard Mark. His face was beat red, furious as can be. All I chould do was laugh. I fell to my knees, rolling over this freezing ice. Tears of joy streamed down my kneck. His face was now confused, frustraed, and slightly worried. He spoke slowly, looking me in the eye. I didnt hear a word he spoke over my laughter. "There gone. There gone Mark." I screamed furoisly. I grabbed his arms swinging him around, as a child dancing. He slapped my face so suddenly. "Are you crazy?" he demanded. I smiled once more. "Indeed I am." I whisperd inches from his ear. I luaghed even harder now, stomping forcefully on the shatterd glass beneath my feet. "There gone!"I sang. I hugged him closely as he kissed the top of my head. "There gone, he whisperd, balrey breathing on my scalp. Passage two- (through someone elses eyes, but about the same girl) "Shes down the hall, last door to the left." said the receptionist, in a fake, cheesy smile. I walked down the hall hearing screams of terror, people hurdiling through anything just to get away from the doctors, and the phsyc ward, but when I got to her room it was calm. There she sit, on a small wooden chair, gazing blankly out her window. Her hair looked ratty, as though it hadnt been washed in days. Her face was pale as an egg, and her eyes, oh her eyes, they where blank. Nothing was there, not the ussal sparkle I saw when we greeted, nor the hate she often experinced. Just empty, yet they remained to be the most buetifull pool of blue I'd ever seen. She had me worried for a moment, untill I saw a familar, devious grin across her face. "The humans are oblivios." She laughed. She stood up quickly and streached her arms as high as they chould reach, along with a good crack in the back. She looked at me and laughed again. "Ive been sitting in a damn chair for 6 months pretending to be sycotic. Are you going to take me out of here or are you going to kill them all for your self?"she asked frustrated. I quickly relized Id been lost in her eyes, and handed her the bag of clothing Id brought, along with the Gingritine. "Im going to change in the bathroom." she said, shutting the door behind her. I sat on her bed for a few minutes, noticing how grey the room was. No color what so ever, acceot her beutifull eyes. I started to lay down when I felt a crinkle under the sheet. I pulled out a few letters from beneath me, most of them from an anonymous writer untill I came across one from Ollie her self. Dear Alex, He's said to be visiting in 5 months. I will find a way to excuse my self, and take the pills. I promise, I will see you soon. I love you. p.s I cant wait to see our babys I held the tiny letter in my hand caught of gaurd. Number one-Alex has been dead two years. Two-So have there children. 3-Shes alone. I rushed toward the bathroom only to find a open window,with no one inside, and an empty bottle of the pills I had given her. Have fun

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

[quote=" Category 1- 1 mill What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality) My favorite part physically is my eyes. Im not trying to be vane, but I adore my eyes, and I always have people compliment them. My favorite part about my persoanlty, is I let things go as long as there not debate realted. If it was just they called me a name, I get over it 5 minutes later. Whats a pet peeve you dont expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? When people rub there hands on carpet material Whats your favorite part in a person? Humor for sure! Category 2- 2 mill What do you love about your family, and hate? I love that my step mom loved to joke around, I hate everything else about my family. Im not even going to go there Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) Laid back, though I do like dressing up in a casuall way Whats a talent you have that your proud of? Singing. I love to sing and do it often and I always get "are you in chouir" and I actulyl had someone to day tell me " Dang you should be famous instead of that miley cyrus" I felt kind of proud, considering i have few talent. Something embersiign to admit is im BEST at opera.... Category 3- 3 mill Read these passege and tell me what you think you know about this charecter. Passege one- I gazed at the blood flow, slowly gliding down the edge of the knife as I splashed it into the vile. Hate enraged through my vanes as I held the tiny bottle between my fingers. My children-gone. My lover-gone. My life-gone. Fire spread through my skin, I chould feel my face flushing And as that hate took over my very soul, I dropped the bottle and wached it slowly shatter of the icy pathway. Mark stared at the splatterd blood, engraged at my lack of self control. I on the other hand, grinned. My hate was settling, and my craving for revenge had finally settled. I admired my work, the last drop of blood of the enimie I shall ever see. "Mark... there gone. There really gone." I cryed as I rushed to wrap my arms around him. "There gone, your safe now." he whisperd as he slowly rubbed my back to comfort me. "All gone." Have fun[/quote]

Mileysmybaby · October 2010

Whats your favorite part in a person? Friendlyness Whats a talent you have that your proud of? Horse Riding The person is Emo?

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

Must awnser all questions from a caterogy dear (; Im not trying to give stuff away, but relize she has her reasons forr what she did. She dosent enjoy just blood she said "the last enimies drop of blood". Hint hint sort of?

ANNA88 · October 2010

Category 2- 2 mill What do you love about your family, and hate? I like that my family is smallish and it is usually quiet at home... But my sibling can get kinda moody and that is not pleasant at all! Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) I am very laid back, i let things go... Usually.

I also like to dress different from everybody else, i hate to dress/act the same as everyone else just because everyone else might think it is cool... I am not the one to follow the crowd. Whats a talent you have that your proud of? I really love to do loon calls, i love loons... And many people love my loon calls and want me to show all there friends/relatives. Its funny! I do them on the lake all the time, and loons even call back! =p I also bought this loon flute thing that makes loon calls, but they answer better to my own loon calls than that of the loon flute. Lol! Only felt like doing this part... I do get two million for just this part, right??

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

I choose the best awnsers at the end (=

ANNA88 · October 2010

Alright, when does it end??

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

not sure yet..... mabey a week

ANNA88 · October 2010

Awww, darn! I need money NOW! Lol,

Are we allowed to edit out answers if we think of more?

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

yuppers! Also you may do all 3 catergorys with the possobiltys of winnnin all 5 mill

Biffle4e · October 2010

Idk if we were suppose to answer all three categories but I'm going to anyways, so here it goes.... What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality)? My favorite part of myself is my heart; I'm so open so anyone and everyone, especially animals. People can be rude to me, and call me names but I always forgive them because that's just who I am. Whats a pet peeve you dont expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? My pet peeve is animal neglect! I know it sounds like a common one but if I even see an animal in a shelter I get all twisted inside; I cannot stand to look at an animal that is not being properly cared for without feeling the need to take it in. Whats your favorite part in a person? I actually like if a person has self-awareness; I like people who know who they are and what they want from life and wont let anything (boys, unhappiness, and other life obstacles) get in their way. Category 2- 2 mill What do you love about your family, and hate? I love that my mom is so lenient with me and lets me have my farm of animals; I hate that I don't have a bigger, closer family. Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) I am very laid back and I've been known to dress a little punk, though I don't do that as much anymore. Whats a talent you have that your proud of? I am very proud of my talent to train animals. I have a two year eight month old Rackaloosa (racking horse/appaloosa cross) and I had her fully broken before her second birthday without the use of harsh training, a bit, or even a saddle until I was sure she was comfortable enough. I'm also very good at training dogs; I have a very close bond with my lab mix Bebe and I have her trained to do so much more than just tricks. Category 3- 3 mill Read this passage and tell me what you think you know about this character. Passage one- I gazed at the blood flow, slowly gliding down the edge of the knife as I splashed it into the vile. Hate enraged through my veins as I held the tiny bottle between my fingers. My children-gone. My lover-gone. My life-gone. Fire spread through my skin, I could feel my face flushing And as that hate took over my very soul, I dropped the bottle and watched it slowly shatter of the icy pathway. Mark stared at the splattered blood, enraged at my lack of self control. I on the other hand, grinned. My hate was settling, and my craving for revenge had finally settled. I admired my work, the last drop of blood of the enemy I shall ever see. "How dare you!" hollered Mark. His face was beat red, furious as can be. All I could do was laugh. I fell to my knees, rolling over this freezing ice. Tears of joy streamed down my neck. His face was now confused, frustrated, and slightly worried. He spoke slowly, looking me in the eye. I didn't hear a word he spoke over my laughter. "They're gone. They're gone Mark." I screamed furiously. I grabbed his arms swinging him around, as a child dancing. He slapped my face so suddenly. "Are you crazy?" he demanded. I smiled once more. "Indeed I am." I whispered inches from his ear. I laughed even harder now, stomping forcefully on the shattered glass beneath my feet. "They're gone!"I sang Okay I'm not 100% sure what you want in this part but I believe that this character is struggling with grief at his terrible loss. He feels frustrated that he couldn't protect them and enraged at the person who took them away. He's in a state of shock now, which is why he is laughing and going crazy; he's at the point where he could and would do anything just because he has nothing left to loose. I think this character has gone insane in the mind from the tragedy he suffered.

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

Im very happy with your awnser to catergory 3 (; Its not right at all but its the best awsner I expected. one, its a girl. two I know knowone will be even close because they have no idea what this means what so ever. Only me and a close friend of mine. Very very twsited, its literrly impossibly to know from this one passage, or a whole life story for that fact. What I ment to say was i love all of your awsners!

Biffle4e · October 2010

Oh whoops, I put 'he' because I read it very quickly and didn't realize

Well you get what I meant.

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

I added a pasage!

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

nvm i must have put submit instead of publish, but i plan on adding one soon

RoseCooper · October 2010

this is really interesting. Category 1 What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality) Physically, my ability to climb things. Psychologically, I have a love/hate relationship with the way I can analyze everything. It's great to be able to figure out where my friends will be from things they've said, but it gets frustrating to always be picking things apart and figuring out what I think their meaning is. What's a pet peeve you don't expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? my friends thinking they have to get a 100 on school assignments--it drives me crazy because when they think that, they can never measure up to their own standard. What's your favorite part in a person? Honesty, honesty, honesty. If someone is willing to be honest, then I'll fine with them. They could hate me, but so long as they're honest about that and don't pretend to like me, then we're good. Category 2 What do you love about your family, and hate? I love that my family likes each other, that we actually enjoy being around each other. The older I get the more I realize how rare that is. As for what I hate about my family, it may sound odd, but I can't think of anything. What annoys me about them? The way my younger siblings think that they should have all the privileges that I have, despite the fact that they're 3 and 5 years younger than me. What's your style (emo, preppy, laid back) Laid back. Everyone comments on how peaceful and steady I seem. I don't feel like I'm steady and laid back, I always feel like my emotions are rocking me pretty hard, but the way I come off to others is definitely laid back and calm. I'm willing to be flexible and not freak out when plans change. What's a talent you have that your proud of? Being able to listen to my friends when something's wrong, being able to ask the questions that will get them to talk when they need to get things off their chest. Category 3 Read this passege and tell me what you think you know about this charecter. passage one: "the last drop of blood of the enimie I shall ever see" -- is the "ever" a typo? If it's really supposed to be never, then I would guess that the blood contains a sickness/disease/virus type thing. She's obviously lost a lot, though I can't quite tell why. There was some enemy, and she finally managed to exact revenge on the enemy. She shows incredible relief, I'm guessing she was after this for a long time in order to exult that much. passage two: So her name is Ollie? I don't think she wrote that letter intending to send it to Alex, but instead to confuse the guy who's point of view the passage is in. If she'd meant for it to be sent, it wouldn't be in the bed. Unless...unless the pills would somehow kill her, and in that take her to her family that's been dead for two years. Either way, she's very obviously clever and seems driven by how much she cared/cares about her children and lover.

ANNA88 · October 2010

How many people are you choosing??

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

one from each catergory.

Jayden123 · October 2010

Category 2- 2 mill What do you love about your family, and hate? I love there all kind and loving

but i hate that some of my family are really mean! Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) Laid back

Whats a talent you have that your proud of? Horse riding

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

I adore all of your resposes (: Ever is right, its the last one shell ever see. As for alex, yes her names Ollie, and i intentionlly left out sevral details, but i guess ill explain. The letter was supposed to be sent, alex is still alive, but the male in her room doesnt know it. Her children for one our dead, and there alexs children (alex is human, they where killed because shes not supposed to have relationships with a human). The pills, the ones that the visitor have her along with clothes are ones that make her normal again. Now shes a "porshie" a very very powerfill creature. Most powerfull one in the world. Can do anything she wants, if she wants icecream, she gets it, if she wants you dead, your dead /: Well shes been human awhile because the male had to take her powers away as part of a mission to keep her safe, but the pills give all ower back. Now she took them, left the room, and shes going to save Alex, and the 17 women of her kind. As for your comment, she is very very clever. Shes dosent need her powers, if a gang trys to get her, she'll wipe em out. (: And the reason the male chould take the powers away, is hes just as powerfull, hes the male version, there supposed to be a mated pair, but Ollie dosent intend in following rules. And now her names not ollie, her name changes, as does her idenity sevral times, in order to save the 17 sisters. I know comfusing (:

PrincessMaddy · October 2010

Category 1- 1 mill What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality) My favorite part of me physically is my eyes. I think they are so cool because they change colors sometimes they are light blue and other times they are green I love it :P and my favorite part about my personality is that I am always nice to everyone even if I can't stand the person I am always nice and rarely show hatred. Whats a pet peeve you dont expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? I hate the feel of having dirty feet it drives me crazy

Whats your favorite part in a person? My favorite part of a person is how caring and nice they are Category 2- 2 mill What do you love about your family, and hate? I love that my family and i can joke and laugh around for hours and hours it makes them so much fun to hang out with. I really can't think of anything I hate about my family, we are just so close I don't really hate anything about them they can get annoying at sometimes but I don't hate it. Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) I'm somewhere in between preppy and laid back I like to look nice and be all hyper but other times I'm calm and relaxed Whats a talent you have that your proud of? I am super proud of how I can train dogs. I trained my dog the hokey poky and its so cute to watch him do it, I also taught my neighbor's crazy silly dogs to walk nicely on a leash with out dragging you every where.

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

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Braeton · October 2010

Category 1- 1 mill Q:What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality) A:My favorite part about myself physically is my hair

I don't want to sound all stuck up or anything but my hair is naturally light light blonde and I feel very lucky because of it. A lot of people have to dye their hair to get the color I have. My favorite part of my personality is my ability to forgive. I hate it when people hold grudges and I'm so glad I'm not that kind of person. I got into a huge fight with my friend a couple years ago. She still hates me, but I've forgiven her and I'm able to still be nice to her:) Q:Whats a pet peeve you dont expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? A:Haha good question! I have two: When one of my family members leaves the kitchen cabinets open, and when someone uses the word "refreshing" to describe a food. It just creeps me out!

Q:Whats your favorite part in a person? A:I love it when a person is honest. It just kills me when people lie and, to me, honest people are the most lovable because you know you can always trust them! Category 2- 2 mill Q:What do you love about your family, and hate? A:I love how well we get along, and how we can say things to each other that we can't say to anyone else:) I hate how when we get into a fight, nobody talks to each other. Like there's dead silence around the house for a long time. Q:Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) A:I'd say sporty. I like wearing girly things to dances and parties and stuff, but if you're my friend you'd know I'll most likely be wearing a hoodie and sweatpants:) Q:Whats a talent you have that your proud of? A:I'm very athletic, at least that's what everyone tells me. I love being out on the field (I play field hockey) and I love the rush it gives me when I score a goal. I was lucky enough to be born athletic but I know a lot of people are just uncoordinated so I'm very proud of myself. Category 3- 3 mill Q:Read this passege and tell me what you think you know about this charecter. Passege one- I gazed at the blood flow, slowly gliding down the edge of the knife as I splashed it into the vile. Hate enraged through my vanes as I held the tiny bottle between my fingers. My children-gone. My lover-gone. My life-gone. Fire spread through my skin, I chould feel my face flushing And as that hate took over my very soul, I dropped the bottle and wached it slowly shatter of the icy pathway. Mark stared at the splatterd blood, engraged at my lack of self control. I on the other hand, grinned. My hate was settling, and my craving for revenge had finally settled. I admired my work, the last drop of blood of the enimie I shall ever see. "How dare you!" Hollard Mark. His face was beat red, furious as can be. All I chould do was laugh. I fell to my knees, rolling over this freezing ice. Tears of joy streamed down my kneck. His face was now confused, frustraed, and slightly worried. He spoke slowly, looking me in the eye. I didnt hear a word he spoke over my laughter. "There gone. There gone Mark." I screamed furoisly. I grabbed his arms swinging him around, as a child dancing. He slapped my face so suddenly. "Are you crazy?" he demanded. I smiled once more. "Indeed I am." I whisperd inches from his ear. I luaghed even harder now, stomping forcefully on the shatterd glass beneath my feet. "There gone!"I sang. I hugged him closely as he kissed the top of my head. "There gone, he whisperd, balrey breathing on my scalp. A: I think she is someone who has been through too much hardship and seen too many thing she shouldn't had seen in her life. Nothing made sense to her and all she could think of was killing people although she didn't really know for sure why. She was very troubled and had a rough life so far. ps very well written! (if you were the one who wrote it!) Passage two- (through someone elses eyes, but about the same girl) "Shes down the hall, last door to the left." said the receptionist, in a fake, cheesy smile. I walked down the hall hearing screams of terror, people hurdiling through anything just to get away from the doctors, and the phsyc ward, but when I got to her room it was calm. There she sit, on a small wooden chair, gazing blankly out her window. Her hair looked ratty, as though it hadnt been washed in days. Her face was pale as an egg, and her eyes, oh her eyes, they where blank. Nothing was there, not the ussal sparkle I saw when we greeted, nor the hate she often experinced. Just empty, yet they remained to be the most buetifull pool of blue I'd ever seen. She had me worried for a moment, untill I saw a familar, devious grin across her face. "The humans are oblivios." She laughed. She stood up quickly and streached her arms as high as they chould reach, along with a good crack in the back. She looked at me and laughed again. "Ive been sitting in a damn chair for 6 months pretending to be sycotic. Are you going to take me out of here or are you going to kill them all for your self?"she asked frustrated. I quickly relized Id been lost in her eyes, and handed her the bag of clothing Id brought, along with the Gingritine. "Im going to change in the bathroom." she said, shutting the door behind her. I sat on her bed for a few minutes, noticing how grey the room was. No color what so ever, acceot her beutifull eyes. I started to lay down when I felt a crinkle under the sheet. I pulled out a few letters from beneath me, most of them from an anonymous writer untill I came across one from Ollie her self. Dear Alex, He's said to be visiting in 5 months. I will find a way to excuse my self, and take the pills. I promise, I will see you soon. I love you. p.s I cant wait to see our babys I held the tiny letter in my hand caught of gaurd. Number one-Alex has been dead two years. Two-So have there children. 3-Shes alone. I rushed toward the bathroom only to find a open window,with no one inside, and an empty bottle of the pills I had given her. A: Wow this is intense!:) I don't know what to say. I think she's imagining things and thinks she's fine but she's really crazy? She's making up all these impossible situations in her head? Haha I want to read more of this now!!!

Cecekiwi · October 2010

sounds fun!!! category 1 What's your favorite part of your self physically, and physcotically (personality) eg. Eyes, humor, nose, shyness ect Physically- I love my hair,(sorry i sound selfcentered) My hair is so soft and I love my color. it like a red brown blonde. It funny,when someone ask me what I like about myself physically all I can say is my hair. (kinda got low self esteem issues) but I am working on it. Whats a pet peeve you dont expect anyone else to have, or an uncommon one? eg-Fuzzy Peaches (real pet peeve of my mothers lol) well I have a few minor things that can just send me off the wall,but here is the first one that comes to mind. People just touching my stuff. people just walking in my room first off then start to touch my stuff.... Whats your favorite part in a person? eg. humor, kindness ect I sound like I am copying the thing above me but,Humor is defently my fav. it is so easy to be friends with a funny type of person. They just make life so much easier when things seem hard. category 2 What do you love about your family, and hate? I love my mom,I love that she is so strong and willing to take everything that is thrown at her every day. I strongly dislike some people in my family that are heartless backstabbers Whats your style (emo, preppy, laid back) I am tired of people at my school trying to label everybody, I get called nerd emo prep and everything else. so here is what I am. I am just me (period) I am who I am no certain label. I am a mix of things not just 1 labeled thing. Whats a talent you have that your proud of? Clarinet and love to read category 3 Mark-he is a little bit calmer and shocked. the other person- Is hurt and depressed in full fury I don't know who the person who took the pills name was so I will call her sue and the other person May Sue- she has been through a lot in her life,she has lost all hope in life and is ready for it to end. May-She is a caring person that is looking out for a friend.

Lonleycarrots · October 2010

Rose Cooper wins all 3 categorys. I loved all of your awnsers! Thanks for entering guys, send a -5 mill contract to Darky's Rescue

Howdy, Stranger!

Rose cooper wins! Thanks!~

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