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Need some critics

AllInTheNameAllInTheName
edited July 2010 in Artist Alley
Okay so I got really bored and decided to draw a picture of Hayley Williams from paramore. Now this isn't my best sketch I know but my son decided to hide my colored pencils so i had to do it grey scale lol. So I need someone to critique this for me. I was mainly trying to brush up on my shading so if you could focus on that it'd be great. <br><br><img src="http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae182/AlishaWhitfield18/Image-3.jpg"; alt="http://i970.photobucket.com/albums/ae182/AlishaWhitfield18/Image-3.jpg"; class="bb-image" />
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Comments

  • BuffyBoardingBuffyBoarding
    68.93.102.164
    I am -no- artist, but I was asked to critique so i will.<br><br>Mkay so the teeth totally throw off the entire picture to me. I did pull the picture up that I believe you used as a ref, and the teeth just don't sit right with me. <br>That being said..<br>overall the anatomy to me looks great. The shading is very nice also, it could be slightly smoother in some parts but overall I really like the shading. <br>I would love to see a colored version at some point.<br><br>Overall- I like it :wink:
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  • AllInTheNameAllInTheName
    72.172.63.237
    Buffy wrote:
    I am -no- artist, but I was asked to critique so i will.<br><br>Mkay so the teeth totally throw off the entire picture to me. I did pull the picture up that I believe you used as a ref, and the teeth just don't sit right with me. <br>That being said..<br>overall the anatomy to me looks great. The shading is very nice also, it could be slightly smoother in some parts but overall I really like the shading. <br>I would love to see a colored version at some point.<br><br>Overall- I like it :wink:
    <br><br>Yeah I even don't like the teeth :( It frustrated me. I'm not very good at drawing peoples mouth...-_- lol But thank you <3 Yeah I tried to post the reference picture as well but my computer wouldn't let me do it for some reason.
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  • MustangBoy615MustangBoy615
    68.80.213.177
    I think you did really well.<br>Without reading, I instantly knew who it was.<br>Great job.
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  • AllInTheNameAllInTheName
    72.172.63.237
    -Mustang- wrote:
    I think you did really well.<br>Without reading, I instantly knew who it was.<br>Great job.
    <br><br>Thank you <3 But buffy is right the teeth kinda throw people off. But at the same time Hayley doesn't have the straightest teeth
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