Pawing Horse/Tribal Design print needs crit! it's due soon.

CallyKats Dachshunds · September 2009

mhmm. For Principles in Design Arts we are making a logo/design that we're printing onto shirts. x.x I'm also thinking about using it as a logo thing for a brand name if I really feel like getting into it and attempting to make most of mi clothes. xD but anywho-I see the transparent background (or suppose to be) as black, so I'm not sure if you guys do too or not, but either way-the shirt's going to be black, so there's the general idea. xD I'm looking for colours to make the horse for the most part, but anything small that you see wrong with the horse, feel free to lemme know-I don't think I can fix something huge though.

Soli · September 2009

That`s relly good.

The only thing that kinda 'irks' me, is the ears. As for colour, I`d do either liek, a bay. Or maybe a chestnut colour... unless you are looking for creative colouring? =]

CallyKats Dachshunds · September 2009

I was looking at the ears too! :O But I did try to fix those..didn't work though. >.> <.< I was thinking something somewhat creative, though somewhat realistic..not completly positive. x.x

98rtsy · September 2009

Maybe color it something that resembles you, your personality, or your interests?

CallyKats Dachshunds · September 2009

That's what I was thinking..though that would probably be something dark..and the shirt is going to be black.

I coloured a dun one (without leg markings for the moment) just to see what it would look like::: <img src="http://i27.tinypic.com/2m26zq9.jpg"; alt="http://i27.tinypic.com/2m26zq9.jpg"; class="bb-image" /> also-do you guys see a black background instead of transparent? O.o

98rtsy · September 2009

Coloring looks nice. And for me it's transparent.

CallyKats Dachshunds · September 2009

thankies. ^-^ mi mum really needs to let me update this damn browser. -beats computer- it's getting to be beyond annoying only having IE6. x.x I may try an colour him a dark red like in mi siggy with white markings where the dorsel strip and the parts of the mane and tail are dark brown.

Doggirl1995 · September 2009

I love your choice of color! Only suggestion I have is to darken the mane to a chocolate brown color I guess. I would have said or black, but the shirt is black. xDD Anyways. I guess I'm a little late, sorry about that, but you could put this towards future horses you draw.

<a href="http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w236/Horsegirl7/redlineforvamp.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i177.photobucket.com/albums/w236 ... orvamp.png</a> Just a.. crappy little redline done in paint with a mouse. xD Ooh. just realized I say 'maybe movie it down' I meant moved. Sorry, it's past 5 am. lmao The background is actually black cause that's how it pasted in there. I hope it helps a little bit! You've come a loooong way.

CallyKats Dachshunds · September 2009

I completly agree with the stomach! xD rofl. I felt bad coz I noticed it as soon as I finished colouring it completly.

The ears-I know..though I'm not daring enough to try and fix them yet again. lmao The mane/tail-I was thinking about that, just didn't know exactly why it looked wierd. xD and thank you. ^-^ I think actually planning the horse out instead of just drawing random lines and hoping I place them relatively right helps alot. xD

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Pawing Horse/Tribal Design print needs crit! it's due soon.

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