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Critique Anyone? Please?

MinxMinx
edited June 2009 in Artist Alley
These are some easy sketches. Theyre nothin special. Im relatively new to drawing so please remember that! BUT! I do want critiqued! And tell the truth pls. <br><br>Some Friesians <br><br><img src="http://i43.tinypic.com/23th0n4.jpg"; alt="http://i43.tinypic.com/23th0n4.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/25evcxd.jpg"; alt="http://i42.tinypic.com/25evcxd.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>An Arabian<br><br><img src="http://i43.tinypic.com/2je61yh.jpg"; alt="http://i43.tinypic.com/2je61yh.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>A Thoroughbred<br><br><img src="http://i44.tinypic.com/2n06fi8.jpg"; alt="http://i44.tinypic.com/2n06fi8.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>A Quarter Horse<br><br><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/6tllaa.jpg"; alt="http://i42.tinypic.com/6tllaa.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>A Tennessee Walker<br><br><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/5f4ta0.jpg"; alt="http://i42.tinypic.com/5f4ta0.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>A Clydesdale (My personal Favorite)<br><br><img src="http://i44.tinypic.com/2cnjd41.jpg"; alt="http://i44.tinypic.com/2cnjd41.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-style:italic"><span style="font-weight:bold">-Colored By My Loverly Chibi-</span></span></span><br><br><img src="http://i40.tinypic.com/4u7u69.jpg"; alt="http://i40.tinypic.com/4u7u69.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

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  • MinxMinx
    69.30.183.249
    added some new ones :D
  • saved09saved09
    216.195.124.1
    Tis so prettiful (Clydesdales, Shires, Belgiums, and Palominos are my faves)
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  • MinxMinx
    69.30.183.249
    its earier for me to do drafties cuz their legs are easier to proportion xD i LOOOVE the clydesdale to DEATH
  • saved09saved09
    216.195.124.1
    i know me too :D I can't even think about drawin that good :)
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  • MinxMinx
    69.30.183.249
    i was shocked when i drew my first.. i was like.. Holy crap... im kinda good =O
  • saved09saved09
    216.195.124.1
    the last thing i tried to draw was a bear. It looked like a lion with no tail, so then i added a tail and a mane, and it got laughed at :(
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  • LukariLukari
    66.24.253.131
    lol the way u said it was funneh :P & there aweshum vampyy
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  • MinxMinx
    69.30.183.249
    ty ty lu. i might see if some1 can color the first friesian and the clyde
  • saved09saved09
    216.195.124.1
    that would be good :D
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  • Doggirl1995Doggirl1995
    edited May 2009 68.150.38.215
    <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:#ff00d2">Looking good!<br>Those are a very good start!<br>I can write up a big thing with critique and stuff later, and I'll include some redlines as well.. when I find my tablet pen. xD</span></span>
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  • reina__reina__
    66.183.115.6
    All I can really say, for cc, is remember that there are no lines in real-life drawing. Drawing with pencils is all about shading. While most people do start off with lines, they end up blending them together with the inside of the drawing. If you're looking to get it digitally colored, the shading shouldn't matter, but if it's going to remain a pencil drawing, I would recommend doing shading. Example: <a href="http://christianscar.deviantart.com/art/Horse-28935403"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://christianscar.deviantart.com/art/Horse-28935403</a>; See? Of course, this person has been drawing either for years and years, or practices 24/7. <br><br>Practice with the angles, conformation of the horse, stare at as many standing/galloping pictures as possible, and get a really good sharpener. I find that horses are one of the toughest animals to draw, because they are so angular and have lots of mass, and then the mane and tail are so soft.<br><br>You have an excellent start, and if you're willing to take advice and get better, you will get better. The person who drew that Friesian on that link started just like you, and had the will and perseverance I hope you have too.
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  • MinxMinx
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    wow. That pics awesome. =O and ty ty. I know the ones in motion are kinda funky >.>
  • GChorseGChorse
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    The best peice of advice i have for you at this point is remember that horses have ankles. =) study the anatomy of the horse very carefully and be a touch more accurate in the legs. but you have a beautiful start and the best thing you can do is practice practice practice (and ofcourse get critiqued) =)
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  • MinxMinx
    98.20.5.85
    xD Ankles *jk*
  • MinxMinx
    98.20.0.214
    Coloring is only trusted to Chibi <3
  • ChibiWerewolfChibiWerewolf
    76.29.51.134
    *thinks* Oh Yea! I'm going to color the other one today! ^^ *goes to retrieve the picture*. <br><br><br><br><br>^^
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  • MinxMinx
    98.20.6.116
    xD Whooot! Chibs Rocks
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