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Random Dogs.

FoolishFoolish
edited June 2008 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:150"><span style="color:red"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Critique Welcome</span></span></span></span><br><br>Also, I realize they are on Lined paper. I was just sketching out of boredom. <br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">One and two</span><br>These two are the same frame with slight differences.<br>If you want to crititique these, pick the one you think is better.<br>It was intended to be a wolf hybrid, but really I'm just trying to get shapes right,<br><span style="font-weight:bold">Original</span><br><img src="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r184/FoolishJaggi/Untitled-3.jpg"; alt="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r184/FoolishJaggi/Untitled-3.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Edited</span><br><img src="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r184/FoolishJaggi/Untitled-2.jpg"; alt="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r184/FoolishJaggi/Untitled-2.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Three</span><br>This is my first time drawing a dog at this angle I would LOVE Critiques.<br>I hate it's tail. don't mention it's odd texture, but I would love help with the angles.<br>And the back Legs/hips.<br><img src="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r184/FoolishJaggi/Untitled-4.jpg"; alt="http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r184/FoolishJaggi/Untitled-4.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

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  • AlliieennssAlliieennss
    71.95.2.248
    I think I can give you a little help on the angles. <br><br>When drawing dogs at that angle you tried there, make sure their legs are apart, they should not be that close. They also should both be..."on the same line". Like the second forepaw is kinda farther back from the first one. At that angle, they should be about equal. Same goes for the hindpaws. <br>Reference is good for that. <br>I don't mean copying a picture exactly, just look at the angles. Try to simplify the picture into a way you would draw it. <br><br>I hope I was a little helpful ^^.
  • FoolishFoolish
    72.200.207.134
    Alliieennss wrote:
    I think I can give you a little help on the angles. <br><br>When drawing dogs at that angle you tried there, make sure their legs are apart, they should not be that close. They also should both be..."on the same line". Like the second forepaw is kinda farther back from the first one. At that angle, they should be about equal. Same goes for the hindpaws. <br>Reference is good for that. <br>I don't mean copying a picture exactly, just look at the angles. Try to simplify the picture into a way you would draw it. <br><br>I hope I was a little helpful ^^.
    <br><br>very, thank you!
  • XxKyliexxXxKyliexx
    24.128.132.206
    <span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-weight:bold">They are both spectactular!<br><br>The first ones legs are a bit long, though. <br><br>That is my only critique.</span></span>
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  • FoolishFoolish
    72.200.207.134
    Kesra wrote:
    <span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-weight:bold">They are both spectactular!<br><br>The first ones legs are a bit long, though. <br><br>That is my only critique.</span></span>
    <br><br>Haha. I seem to love long legs/Large paws.<br>at least with the large paws I Know I'm doing it.
  • XxKyliexxXxKyliexx
    24.128.132.206
    <span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-weight:bold">Hah, you should really consider selling your line-art because if those were just doodles. Imagine what else you can do?</span></span>
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  • FoolishFoolish
    72.200.207.134
    Well, I can only do big dogs and only when I'm in the mood.<br>And it takes me DAYS to draw a dog if it's not just standing there.
  • dachshund girldachshund girl
    71.63.170.227
    i really like the last one!
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