Fox - Critique?

Boz · March 2008

Well I made a Fox for Tarnish's contest. Tell me what you think? <img src="http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j117/CoolBozPup14/2008/MyCreations/2007_03PouncingFox1.png"; alt="http://i78.photobucket.com/albums/j117/CoolBozPup14/2008/MyCreations/2007_03PouncingFox1.png"; class="bb-image" /> Larger view here: <a href="http://bozmurphy.deviantart.com/art/Contest-Pouncing-Fox-Tarnish-81297263"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://bozmurphy.deviantart.com/art/Con ... h-81297263</a> Critique?

MuckyDuckBrendon · March 2008

I hate yhuu bozzy.. (well i dont buht....) I LOVE IT.. i wish i had yhur skills

â™¥Andreaâ™¥ · March 2008

Why do you even post "critique"...there's nothing to critique, it is b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l...DUH, you did it!

heart_2_heart07 · March 2008

It's Awesome. I could only dream of having your Artistic Ability

BuffyReeds · March 2008

That is totally AWESOME!!! :shock:

:shock: How did you make that?!?!?

KiteKatsumi9 · March 2008

The head looks a bit big, and the 'hips' don't look quite thick enough, but other than that...its pretty good

Boz · March 2008

Kite_Katsumi wrote:

The head looks a bit big, and the 'hips' don't look quite thick enough, but other than that...its pretty good

I was thinking that too about the head. And when I look at it the hips do look a tad slim xD Thanks And thanks everyone else!

WolfontheWind · April 2008

If you look at the critique I did on page two of WeisseEdelweiss' post, I think you can benefit a lot from that, and the references posted. I like that you have an action pose, and a reasonable background that matches you style. One thing that bugs me is what I pointed out in WeisseEdelweiss' is the muzzle. It is one straight line. Muzzles of foxes and other canines are BUMP after BUMP. Up, down, up down. The nose bumps, the middle of the muzzle bumps, there is a slope of the forehead. The tail looks a little choppy, it reminds me more of a dog's tail than a foxes'. Don't get me wrong, it is cute and goes with the edgey style, but if you were to do that, it would be more balanced with you made the ridges at the top of the tail and the tip. Vary them a little so it doesn't get boring. I think the limbs are a little long, but the back seems a decent length. The edges you have on the tail really are needed more on the chest, where foxes are known for their short and choppy fur. Around the lips, you can consider making them darker, as just like the eyes you will see skin exposed with no hair. The ears are adorable, but the bug me a bit as well, they just curve out of no where. The ears have two pieces, the little flats of skin, and then the thicker base that attaches it to the skull, you have just the first part defined. Also, don't forget the whiskers and claws! xD I hope this helps. =D

EpikLove · May 2008

The fox is adorable

I love the cartoon-ish look. Also, I've seen some of your other art and they're really, really, good.

Boz · May 2008

Thanks both of you xD This is an old piece already xD

EpikLove · May 2008

Boz wrote:

Thanks both of you xD This is an old piece already xD

xD Oh well. I still love it ^^

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