Continual Story

NickelbackLuver · January 2008

Meh, now that it won't be buried by millions of posts on the other forum... I will try this once again. Rules: -One person will post a portion of the story, the next person continues off from where the person before them cut off. -When you are continuing, keep to the storyline, do not abruptly change the story to something totally different ^.^ -If you would like to include new characters when you post do so, but please make sure they are described accordingly in the post. And be aware, every character you make, everyone else is going to use. -Keep swearing/gory details to a minimum, this is for everyone to enjoy - All posts you make must be continuations of the story. If you feel the need to add a comment, please make it italicized and seperated by a few enters so no one gets confused - Keep spelling&grammer errors to a minimum so it looks professional, also make sure you use correct punctuation (periods at the end of sentences, followed by Capital words, commas when needed) -Have fun ^.^ Questions? Please PM me rather than posting on here, and I will try to answer them. The first story will begin after this post ^.- I will post the first paragraph. Your enteries have to be a minimum of 1 sentence, maximum of 3 paragraphs.

NickelbackLuver · January 2008

(1st person character, wolf) A dim light lit the forest. The moon shone so bright tonight, too bright. I crept in the shadows keeping myself hidden from my enemies. Too many of them were after me, watching my steps, following my every move. I could feel eyes on me when I woke up, but now... It felt like I lost every trace of that feeling. I felt safe now, just the shadows and I. Hiding together, mysterious, dark, lonely. It seemed like there was no end to my dismal escape, there was no escape in sight. I was always trying to escape, but to where? Why did I always run?

tarnish · January 2008

Was I such a coward? No that can't be it, but then why was I always acting like the prey? Crack I flicked my gaze to an old pine. I felt my muscles tense and my heart race. I saw my enemy lurking feet from where the shadows covered my existance. I eased up a little knowing I was down wind. The gust rippling through the trees brought the stench of my enemy blasting into my nose.

HelpTheDogsII · January 2008

Oh and how it hit me. The smell that would put a thousand humans into death, it made my blood curdle. Something in that smell brought me fully alert. It was the smell of a friend. One that was long forgotten and buried deep in my brain.

DoodleBugHolding · January 2008

I was in a state of confusion, weather to jump on this creature or to sit there and wait. I decided to look and wait keeping my body close to the ground, ears back and teeth clenched. In case this creature was to attack I would be ready.

CookiesCream2 · January 2008

It slowly started walking at me. Reavling himself to me. I slinked into the shadows trying not to be seen. To be heard. I stood there waiting, watching, staring to see what would happen next.

NickelbackLuver · January 2008

My breaths slowly tightened, I tried not to breath, not to make a sound. I tried not to exist, I needed to be transparent. My eyes stayed focused on the clearing where the creature came into view as a dark shadow, I was unable to make out the full form. Until it moved slowly closer, and into a streak of moonlight. Could it be? I cocked my head and sniffed the air lightly. The appearence was inevitably him. Smell matched him also. But how? I thought he had been killed, I thought my only companion was gone... This had to be him.

HazelsTrainingBootCa · January 2008

I watched him come a bit closer. He looked the same as when I had last seen him. Right before he had been attacked by our enemies. I had watched them slowly torture him. I had tried to help him but I couldn't do anything agaist them. There had just been to many of them. Oh how was he alive? Was he a ghost comeing back to haunt me?

Frapple · January 2008

By now, i was mezmorized... Was it really him? I wanted to go show him how excited i was; but i was still wondering if it was truly him. I began to tremble thinking of the day when he died, how much pain i was after i had been wounded and stranded, and i just still couldnt believe it was truly him. I looked into his eyes. it must be, it had to be! I got closer... He gnarled at me and i jumped back. He didnt know who i was. That scared me into thinking that it might not be him; but i had to find out.

Silver Husky · January 2008

I slowly crept foward, keeping low to the ground. He just stood there, no movement, no expression, as if he were frozen in time. When I was only a couple steps away, I stopped and raised my body. He just stood there, staring at me with those familer amber eyes. It had to be him! I started foward, a small wimper in my throat. Suddenly, without warning, he lunged at me!

kimyo · January 2008

I freaked out and cringed. Something started to fill the air and the one who looked at me stared back. The creature took off the other direction in fear of suffocation. Looking back, I noticed my stomach was smaller. I started to notice a stench too, and it smelled of beans and rotten flesh. (I just had to do it) xD

~Topleaf~ · February 2008

I stood and stared as he ran off. I howled a long and deep and sorrowfilled howl. He stopped suddenly. Did he remember? He turned and looked back. It began a grumble in his stomach, then rose into a powerful and beautiful howl. He remembered. The one I grew up with, and shared the same mother remembered.

kimyo · February 2008

Taking a deep breath of air, I started to follow where the other went. Since it was getting dark, I had to hurry and catch up with the anonymous creature.

Silver Husky · February 2008

He seemed to travel on and on forever. I was growing very tired. But I would not stop my chase, I would not lose him again. He was my best friend, my companion, my protector, my brother.

kimyo · February 2008

Almost like on cue, a stench filled the air. The oh so familiar scent that we have shared for years. I started to follow that scent, knowing what I would find at the end of my travels.

HazelsTrainingBootCa · February 2008

The creature up ahead slowed down a bit to sniff the air. He paused. He suddenly lowered himself to the ground. I could smell his fear. He was afraid. Of what I did not know. I carefully hid myself too. Hopeing that whatever had my brother so scared would go away. But such things barely ever happen. I finally got scent of what was scareing my brother. I now knew why he was so scared. It was the ones who had hurt us that terrible day. The ones that I thought had killed my brother. They were chaseing something. I saw them slowly slinking along. Trying to stay downwind of their prey. Oh I could have howled with fear. But I stayed very still. Not even whimpering my fear.

PishPosh · February 2008

Though my brother was much weaker. His fear built up in him like the lava in a volcano until it exploded! He let out a yelp and wimper louder than the winds howl that night.

Silver Husky · February 2008

That's when they turned and saw us. They were down-right ugly creatures. They stood on two legs and had no hair exept for on their heads. There soft skin protect by layers of strange material. They didn't even have tails, how disgraceful. They had no claws or fangs, yet they were deadly. They comanded iron sticks that shot fire and could kill a creature in a second.

PishPosh · February 2008

They also had dogs on some type of rope, tied. How dispicable. Keeping wild on a leash. It was ungrateful. My brother ran at his yelp, fire shot out, and the wild was released. The dogs came at me and attacked, wondering why they wouldn't side with me.

Frapple · February 2008

He ran and lunged at the animals, and I was afraid. I didn't want this to be the end! We had just reunited, and we still needed to regain our friendship. I then lunged to, to save the one loved one i had left- my brother. Ever since the day they took my mother, and beat her to death, I could not bear to watch anything suffer from pain. I was attacked by one of the creatures, so i bit as hard as i could on his neck.Just then, I was surprised to feel a sudden pain throughout my body when i looked and saw that the ugly creature had hit me with a club. Before i knew it, i was alike all the other dogs- tied up. I began to think that this might be the end of my brother and i, when i looked up and saw him tied too. What was next for us?

PishPosh · February 2008

It became dark, very dark. I fell asleep. When I awoke I was somewhere cold, and the floor was like stone. I got up and moved forward, still a little woozy, and ran into something. What were they, mini trees? Some sort of trees made out of metal, but small. I tried to climb up and hit my head on the top of something like a cave ceiling. Something was wrong. I was in a box of some sort..but even worse, my brother wasn't with me again.

blackdimond17 · February 2008

next to me was another one of these steel things and inside it was my brother

NickelbackLuver · February 2008

I searched for movement, but he seemed to be laying flat. Unconcious like I was? Jumping at the sound of another animal clawing at their cage instantly, I whirred around to see something else on the other side of me.

PishPosh · February 2008

Another wolf....in fact many of them. What was going on? Was this the end for all of us? All of a sudden I felt a jult, and smelled something. What was that? Smelled kind of like the smoke coming out of the creatures moving things with black circles on them. I realized we were in one of them, but a bigger one, We were being taken somewhere. OOC: they are in a truck being moved to a trading place. auction.

SandPiper · February 2008

Fear rippled through my frame, as I cowered into the corner of the massive barred space. My fur poked out at odd ends and I shivered, trying to keep the horrid scent of fear and the unknown monsters away. The rumbling grew louder and the jolts became slightly harsher. Wolves, as scared as I was, were thrown around wildly in their spaces. What was happening to us?!

PishPosh · February 2008

My brother, still out from being too weak, was just flopping around in his cage. I wish I could have broken out of my cage. That's when I thought I could. The latch on one of the wolves cage, was out of place, and could be easily broken open, well if I did it. I beckoned him to look over so I could explain what to do. The dog seemed as if it couldn't hear me, and then I realized with all the wolves barking and howling, it would be hard to hear anything.

SandPiper · February 2008

Suddenly all the harsh throwing around stopped. I raised my head and sniffed at the air, my ears perked and listening for any sounds that would tell me where I was. The other canids, like myself, stopped their useless crying and looked out curiously from their cages. Silence hung like a wet wool blanket over the dozens of caged canines, as we watched the two legged creatures emerge from their rumbling monsters.

Frapple · February 2008

I was shivering by now. Out of all the dogs, my brother was the only one left that was not moving. Was he...dead? No! He couldn't be! I looked at his cage and mine, hoping to see a way out. Out of the blue, i felt something bite me. I jumped around, and saw a wolf with red eyes, and looked evil beyond all measures, growling at me. I wasnt the type to fight back! That was my brother, but he was over in another cage, isolated from his clan of wolves. The wolf in my cage lunged at me, and i lunged back. Oh No! then, as if it were my best friend, a fluffy, curly, dog showed up and nipped the evil one. I learned his name was Venara. He was my best friend out of all the dogs in my cage.

blackdimond17 · March 2008

Finally they took us inside. They placed us on top of one anthers cage and then left.

BlueRose · March 2008

I was scared half to death. All of the other dogs were panting hard, harder than I was, to my surprise. They were thin and poor - as if they had sat in the cage for many years. I then got up, with all my might and howled a very deep howl. It was the howl of the historic wolf clan, Kagari. You only howl like it when all hope is lost. Will the Kagari clan come for us? Will they be able to get past the strange two-legged creatures that we all fear? My new friend, Venara stayed with me the whole time. I felt safer and warmer with him around. It was a very good feeling to have a friend with me.

Mikey Makita · March 2008

To my suprise I saw some members of the Kagari Clan in the cages.But where were the stronger members?Suddenly the two Alphas were seen,fighting to get in with the rest of the clan on their tails

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