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Mah poem. I was super duper bored, and this is what came out.<br><br><span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-style:italic">Your Bonsai to Bend</span><br><br>You victimize me<br>For no good reason<br>It must not be<br>The hunting season<br><br>Can’t say I never was<br>But now I’m not your friend<br>Simply because I’m not<br>Your Bonsai to bend.<br><br>You’re in your own world<br>Not wanting to come out<br>It is safe with your kind<br>But they have much doubt<br><br>No one is allowed in<br>And it’s hard to leave<br>Because different people<br>Are not what you perceive<br><br>Because I am different<br>I am not you<br>You did not like me<br>And now I hate you<br><br>You shut us all out<br>Very few are the same<br>Because we are different<br>We’re all fair game<br><br>Now everyone has left<br>You are alone <br>Doomed to seclusion<br>Because we are not clones.<br><br>And all through the years<br>People won’t bend<br>And you will end up<br>You’re only friend<br><br>You locked yourself in<br>And threw away the key<br>The key is not lonesome<br>You threw away me.<br></span><br><br>I like it. What do you think?<br><br>By the way...<br>Bonsai (bon-zh-eye) is a little tree that are kept in a pot and trimmed to be "pretty"<br>The period is at the end of the last line for symbolic reasons....<br>Oh mi gosh, it rhymes!
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I'll miss you Sernie<3