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Critque: Poem
Well.. dont Critque that much >.<<br><br>It was a homework assignment so i dont want anybody helping me out with a school assignment..<br><br><span style="font-size:150"><span style="font-weight:bold">Stolen Souls</span></span><br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">I remember<br><br>The Crackling Through The Barn Wall<br>The Yellow Orange Seeping Through The Windows<br>Wasnt What It Seemed<br><br>I remember<br><br>The Horse's Painful Screams<br><br>I remember<br><br>The Instructors Worried Voice:<br>"Get Out!"<br><br>I remember <br><br>The ways he gazed at me<br>When I Shut The Stall Door,<br>His Eyes Frightened And Confused.<br><br>I remember<br><br>Through My Blurred Eyes<br>I Watched The Old Wooden Barn <br>Collaspe In The Heat Of The Flames<br>Taking The Two Stolen Souls With It</span><br><br>Yes for those who know me this was a poem about the horrible Fire at my Barn.<br><br>Please Answer These Questions If You Want To Critque it<br><br>Can You Tell That It Was The Second Barn The Burned?<br>Can You Tell Two Horses Died?<br>Can You Tell I was Crying?<br>Can You Tell I Was Inside A Barn?<br>Can You Tell It Was A Fire?<br><br>Please add anything else.. i want to make this a great peom
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