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So I really want to be a writer as well as a vet, but this is my first shot at writing a decent book and I am off to a great start I believe! I was wondering is anyone wanted to look at it and tell me what they think? Or even give suggestions for chapters to come! I can give 1 mill VPC for everyone that critiques and votes for it on Wattpad! :) <br><br>Farmer's Daughter<br><a href="http://www.wattpad.com/story/20423995-farmer's-daughter&quot; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.wattpad.com/story/20423995-f ... s-daughter</a><br><br>Description- Hailey lives with her widowed father on their farm in Antlers, Oklahoma. Hailey has faced many challenges already, including the death of her mother, but when her father hires a man named Liam Scott, her world is constantly challenged. Hailey despises Liam, but when horrible things happen, will Hailey have a change of heart? And maybe do some things that her father wouldn’t approve of?
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  • I'm a frequent Wattpad reader, and I specialize in reading teen fiction/romance/humor. :lol: (Currently reading Saving Elliot and it's been very good so far). I've tried my hand at writing and I just really don't have the dedication to finish my books.<br><br>I just skimmed over yours quickly, since I really should be getting to bed. I did notice some relatively minor grammar issues/awkward wording. Other than that, the only advice I have to you about future chapters is do everything in your power to avoid cliches! I love a good, original book.
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  • I'm a frequent Wattpad reader, and I specialize in reading teen fiction/romance/humor. :lol: (Currently reading Saving Elliot and it's been very good so far). I've tried my hand at writing and I just really don't have the dedication to finish my books.<br><br>I just skimmed over yours quickly, since I really should be getting to bed. I did notice some relatively minor grammar issues/awkward wording. Other than that, the only advice I have to you about future chapters is do everything in your power to avoid cliches! I love a good, original book.
    <br>I'm working on it! I would like someone to help me revise chapters, but I haven't found anyone to help me! Considering the mistakes in grammAr, that isn't that bad!! My grammr used to be horrible!! :lol: Thank you for looking at it!
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