Hi, I am offering <span style="font-weight:bold">free</span> constructive critique to banner makers out there. You may remember me.<br><br>I have been making banners since 2008 and am a freelance graphic artist. I've made banners for numerous dog breeders around <br>the globe and magazine/book advertisements. I am self taught. This can happen for you too, with practice!!<br><br>The program I "grew up using" was Paint Shop Pro 9. I currently use Photoshop Elements 7. These tiny, basic programs can do<br>all you want them to do and need them to do. I offer help with either of these programs. I do not offer help with GIMP because<br>I don't have it and frankly, I didn't like it very much.<br><br>Please post your banner in link form. I will reply to yours separately. Please do not enter your banner if you get offended easily<br>or cannot take critique. I will not be rude or mean... but I will tell you what you could have done better or how you can improve.<br><br>My most recent banner:<br><br><img src="http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/260/d/7/foursaken_banner_by_reinafawn-d6mmveo.png" alt="http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/260/d/7/foursaken_banner_by_reinafawn-d6mmveo.png" class="bb-image" /><br><br>Gallery: <a href="http://reinafawn.deviantart.com/gallery/25512449?offset=24" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://reinafawn.deviantart.com/gallery ... ?offset=24</a>
"war cry" presas canarios, aryan molossus, and cao.
<br><br>I thought it was the correct place. It's in Artist's Corner and I'm offering services. I'm not trying to show off my artistic skill. Though, I will close this and move if it is, in fact, what I am doing.
"war cry" presas canarios, aryan molossus, and cao.
<br><br>I've missed you my darling! I've always loved your banners.<br><br><a href="http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i371/StormGrEshAm/Random Graphics/skkeosk_zpsf84a6055.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i37 ... 4a6055.png</a><br><br>-Right off the bat it is a very aesthetically pleasing banner. The color palette you have chosen, blues, greens, and yellow, all lgo well together.<br>-JaneAusten is a nice font for a banner like this.<br>-The backrounds all blend beautifully, especially with the blue line behind the girl's legs and behind the hands.<br>-I do have to squint to read the writing, and I have pretty good eyesight. I've love to see a simpler font for the white text, maybe Century Gothic super small and anti-alias switched on. I do like the Romance Fatale Serif in the light yellow though. <br><br><a href="http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i371/StormGrEshAm/Random Graphics/kiyg_zps38c63a2c.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i37 ... c63a2c.png</a><br><br>-I automatically like this banner because it all breeds I love! Hehe. Except, Rotts and CCs aren't bully breeds but I don't think you have anything to do with that, lol.<br>-I like the orange to grey, I've done that before too.<br>-The cropping is hard but clean for the most part. It could have been maybe 1px softer and wet better.<br>-The subtext is hard to read again though. It sorta blends in with the main text. I like using will&Grace with Trajan Pro, it keeps the professional, simple look but is easy to read.<br><br>For the Wolverine one, I don't have a lot to say other than good job on balancing, the pics are on the right side and the text is on the left side. Good use feathering and colors. I would have liked to see maybe something in the shadows on top of Wolverine, maybe eyes of a wolf or something faded in.<br><br>Thank you !! Talk soon :}
"war cry" presas canarios, aryan molossus, and cao.
<br><br>Hey there, I will critique you to help you move forward, even a professional artist can move forward from where they currently are.<br><br><a href="http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y490/RaeBryson/BBBPhotoManipbanner_zps572a1b4e.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y49 ... 2a1b4e.png</a><br><br>-Nice cropping job. I love it especially in the foreground, whereas in the background it gets a little blurry but I have a feeling that's just what the original photo looked like and not of your doing. <br>-The text is really trippy.. not in a good way. I would try a simpler font, either that or completely take out the duplicate text. This font is a preinstalled font and I don't often condone using preinstalled fonts for the main text. Reason why is because it can look much too plain and basic for an image meant to be special or advertise.<br>-I won't tell you how I feel about rainbow gradients.<br>-Try making "By Bryson" smaller and in some type of subtext or pixel lettering. It is still readable but isn't the main focus of the banner.<br><br><a href="http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y490/RaeBryson/PRPbanner_zpsa4c5c157.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y49 ... c5c157.png</a><br><br>-Your cropping/erasing is very good! If you erased all these on your own, I commend you, if not, I'd love to know where you got this image from.<br>-There's that font again. There's a lot of nice bold script fonts to download for free, try it if you haven't.<br>-The purple and yellow you have chosen clash. Maybe try a darker purple and a different text color, maybe a dark or light neutral. I have to strain to read the subtext.<br>-In your subtext, the use of the same font you used for the main text seems a little plain again.<br><br><a href="http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y490/RaeBryson/partners_zps3f203864.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y49 ... 203864.png</a><br><br>-Nice background!<br>-The cropping of the dogs in this isn't as good as the other two I've looked at of yours. You want to get right to the dog's body and fur. <br>-Get rid of that yellow color. Bright, saturated colors rarely look good in a banner for the text unless it calls for it. For me, a sunset banner with a field of flowers already has enough bright colors in it. And, as I always say, a banner always needs a black or grey neutral in it. It adds structure.<br>-Good banners have structure and balance. The fluffy edge of the background doesn't really have either of these.<br><br><a href="http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y490/RaeBryson/Rockiedesktop_zps9cb55838.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y49 ... b55838.png</a><br><br>-Get that erasing right near the dog's body. <br>-You have used a very simple bold font again. Try using some downloadable script fonts from dafont.com or others.<br>-In my opinion, the red and blue you have chosen also clash. Colors that go together are ones that are found in nature. I can't think of anything in nature that is rich, dark red and dark, rich blue. Maybe flowers, but not along with light brown and white and light blue. I think white or light grey would have looked better. Pull colors from your banner for the text.<br><br><a href="http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y490/RaeBryson/eventingbanner_zps398f7950.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y49 ... 8f7950.png</a><br><br>-I like this everything about this banner except the font/color of it and the ball. If you are adamant about using bright colors, at least do it with a neutral or use a pinch of it instead of all of the text being the same, unpleasing color. <br>-Again, try a downloaded font instead. It's amazing how much a font changes the first impression.<br>-Softly erase the feet of the rescue dog like you did with the puppy in the top corner.<br><br>Try these tips out. They are usable for your dog pics as well. I think you have tremendous potential to be a professional or at least professional-level banner maker, the way you use lots of photos in your manips. If you have a desire to, you can do anything.
"war cry" presas canarios, aryan molossus, and cao.
Thank you, this critique was very helpful! I will say that, for the banners, the color scheme was usually pre-determined (by the person the banner was for or the layout it was made for), but I will work on using more neutral colors, especially for the text... I've just recently discovered a font site that works for me, so I won't be using any of those same fonts anymore I will also work on the structure and balance of my banners. Thank you for taking the time to help!<br><br>How's this?<br><a href="http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y490/RaeBryson/CSTIce_zps3fdb381f.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1277.photobucket.com/albums/y49 ... db381f.png</a>
<br><br>I've missed you my darling! I've always loved your banners.<br><br><a href="http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i371/StormGrEshAm/Random Graphics/skkeosk_zpsf84a6055.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i37 ... 4a6055.png</a><br><br>-Right off the bat it is a very aesthetically pleasing banner. The color palette you have chosen, blues, greens, and yellow, all lgo well together.<br>-JaneAusten is a nice font for a banner like this.<br>-The backrounds all blend beautifully, especially with the blue line behind the girl's legs and behind the hands.<br>-I do have to squint to read the writing, and I have pretty good eyesight. I've love to see a simpler font for the white text, maybe Century Gothic super small and anti-alias switched on. I do like the Romance Fatale Serif in the light yellow though. <br><br><a href="http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i371/StormGrEshAm/Random Graphics/kiyg_zps38c63a2c.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i1090.photobucket.com/albums/i37 ... c63a2c.png</a><br><br>-I automatically like this banner because it all breeds I love! Hehe. Except, Rotts and CCs aren't bully breeds but I don't think you have anything to do with that, lol.<br>-I like the orange to grey, I've done that before too.<br>-The cropping is hard but clean for the most part. It could have been maybe 1px softer and wet better.<br>-The subtext is hard to read again though. It sorta blends in with the main text. I like using will&Grace with Trajan Pro, it keeps the professional, simple look but is easy to read.<br><br>For the Wolverine one, I don't have a lot to say other than good job on balancing, the pics are on the right side and the text is on the left side. Good use feathering and colors. I would have liked to see maybe something in the shadows on top of Wolverine, maybe eyes of a wolf or something faded in.<br><br>Thank you !! Talk soon :}
<br><span style="font-size:85"><span style="color:#0000FF">Thanks so much love!</span></span>
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