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Looking for Critique

LbaalLbaal
edited June 2013 in Artist Alley
I haven't drawn a dog in a <span style="font-style:italic">very</span> long time, but I just got me two Presa Canarios and thought I'd give drawing them a shot. Any and all critique is welcome and honestly wanted. :) <br><br><img src="http://i728.photobucket.com/albums/ww281/luciferbaal/perrola_zpsb536457c.png"; alt="http://i728.photobucket.com/albums/ww281/luciferbaal/perrola_zpsb536457c.png"; class="bb-image" />

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  • Frostbight8Frostbight8
    76.179.160.150
    This is awesome! If you ever wanted to start a commission thread, you'd definitely get some people who are interested (including myself!)<br><br>As a person who couldn't draw to save their life, critiquing art isn't really my thing. However, I noticed that the left hind leg (if you were looking at the dog head on) seems to be a tad enlarged past the hock. Other than that I love it, the dog's expression is perfect and I especially love how you show muscle tone.
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  • MrCleanMrClean
    174.98.193.248
    Wow that's really good! I'm with Frost, I'd definitely want some dog pics if you decided to sell them!<br><br>I think the dog's legs are slighty too short for the rest of its body, which makes the height-length proportion a little off, but the musculature and bone structure are amazing! I love the facial expression and how strong you made the neck
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  • LbaalLbaal
    98.125.202.40
    Ah, thank you both for the kind comments! ^_^ I'm not sure I'm ready to jump into any full-scale commissions thing, but I really do appreciate the show of interest! Y'all know how to encourage a girl's ego! :3<br><br>I do agree on the legs being off. I've drawn way to many hoofed creatures, lol. And I'm glad you mentioned the shortness! I did not see that! You get so involved in the image you can miss the simplest things. xD Many thanks to both of you, I'll be giving those legs a fix.
  • ivybear93ivybear93
    122.62.231.114
    Thats fantastic when you start selling these itll put the rest of us out of bussiness ... :)
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    And i belive that half the time i am a wolf amoung the sheep gnawing at the wool over my eyes
  • LbaalLbaal
    98.125.202.40
    Heheh, thank you but I am certain I won't cause much in the way of business damage. I'm far, far too lazy for that! ^_^
  • ivybear93ivybear93
    122.62.231.114
    Well it looks awesome anyway :)
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    And i belive that half the time i am a wolf amoung the sheep gnawing at the wool over my eyes
  • LbaalLbaal
    98.125.202.40
    Thank you very much! :)
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