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My Main Kennel- http://virtualpups.com/viewkennel.php?kennel=337314
<br>Player Name:*Mysterous Love* and *Magical Love*<br>(link) To dog you want to dye:uh not sure yet xD<br>Color (dye you want):Bay Roan w/ white sock on back right paw <br>or Chestnut w/ Flaxen<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating:</span> 8/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments:</span> I don't quite understand the random caps in the beginning of the color. What would bring my rating up is making all words start with a capital letter. Example: Bay Roan w/ White Sock on Back Right Paw (the 'on' is lowercased because I'm following the format for book/movie titles)<br><br>
<br><br>Player Name: WayUpThere21<br>To dog you want to dye: Will be when I reach 10x4 in my blue paul terrier line, which should be next generation. Here] is the highest I have so far.<br>Color (dye you want): Sky Blue w/ Love Poem on Back<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating:</span> 4/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments:</span> Short is not always bad but I feel you could make this even prettier by inserting some more descriptive words. This concept seems to already have been done as well. <br><br>
<br><br>Player Name: Rock_N_Roll_Queen<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1797620"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1797620</a><br>Color (dye you want): Chrome with Purple Eyes<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating:</span> 3/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments:</span> It seems very short and not too creative. It has room to really play around with to make it amazing.
<br><br>Player Name: Rock_N_Roll_Queen<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=987195"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=987195</a><br>Color (dye you want): Purple with silver toenails and ice blue eyes<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating:</span> 6/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments: </span>That sounds cute to think of the silver toenails. It reminds me of when we painted our shepherd's toenails red. Anyways, I'm going to say the same thing as I did to Mysterous. I dont understand the one random capital at the beginning. Maybe you're seeing it as a sentence? I think Purple with Silver Toenails and Ice Blue Eyes is more aesthetically pleasing. Very cute color though
<br><br>Player Name: Rock_N_Roll_Queen<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1883751"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1883751</a><br>Color (dye you want): Black with a gray chin and red spiked collar<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating:</span> 6/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments: </span>I think you could make this more beautiful by using some synonyms of some words. It's a cute color of your dog
<br><br>Player Name: Rock_N_Roll_Queen<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1790698"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1790698</a><br>Color (dye you want): Blue and wearing a pink tutu<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating: </span>5/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments: </span>I don't think I've ever seen a tutu! That's an interesting idea! I think you could put in mroe description. Maybe.. what kind of tutu? Sparkly? Maybe add more accessories? Ballet flats? And the capitals again.. Blue and Wearing a Pink Tutu<br><br>
<br><br>Player Name: Alliemac1010(here)Mac cat(in VP)<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1853094"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1853094</a><br>Color (dye you want):Waiting Foever To See A Rainbow<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating: </span>7/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments:</span> YES CAPS! *hugs* Hahaha. I'm not too sure what to add. I'm not one for phrase colors like that but if I did, I would like this one
<br><br><br>Player Name: Alliemac1010(here)Mac cat(in VP)<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1853094"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1853094</a><br>Color (dye you want):Beau chien(French for Beautiful dog)<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating: </span>8/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments:</span> Ah no the caps! Beau Chien. I think thats a cute idea incorporating French. I'm not sure if you've taken French or speak it? It's important to check to make sure its the right translation =D Cute idea though!<br><br>
<br><br><br>Player Name:Alliemac1010(here)Mac cat(in VP)<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1879488(got" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1879488(got</a> that dog from you hehe)<br>Color (dye you want):Life wasted being Abused(not true i love this dog)<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Rating:</span> 4/10<br><br><span style="font-weight:bold">Comments: </span>This seems very very familiar. I think its a little too close to all the other abuse dyes. Caps.. Life Wasted Being Abused (I'm not sure actually if 'being' is a word to be capitalized in titles or not)
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<br><br>Player Name: femme<br>(link) To dog you want to dye: <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1417184"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=dog/view&id=1417184</a><br>Color (dye you want): In-canid Strength w. Darkened Eyes & Death Stare<br><br>Rating: 9/10<br><br>Comments: I like the beginning part. I haven't seen that used before =D<br><br>
<br><br>I didn't know there were rules about 10x4s..? I don't see how it matters what the dogs stats are if it's the person thats getting the dog anyways. People tend to dye 10x4s or imports. It is your dye and your call though. Are my entries acceptable or should I change my dog links?
Goals: 13/50million VPC
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