'Twas the Night Before ZOMBIES! :D

In English, we had to re-write "Twas the Night Before Christmas...<br>Here's my 'Twas the Night Before Zombies!<br><br>‘Twas the Night Before Zombies<br><br><br><br>‘Twas the night before zombies, when all through the town,<br><br>Everybody constantly had that terrified frown<br><br>The doors were dead bolted, nice and tight<br><br>So those flesh eating zombies couldn’t come in through the night<br><br><br><br>The children were locked carefully in their rooms<br><br>Because the zombies come out every full moon<br><br>My and my family huddled up with fright,<br><br>As we silently prepared for a long, restless night<br><br><br><br>Out on the street there was a big crash<br><br>And all the sudden, on the window, there was a bloody splash<br><br>I flew to the closet and grabbed my sharp axe<br><br>Trying my hardest to be calm and relaxed<br><br><br><br>I looked outside, blood stained the new fallen snow<br><br>As the moon gave the vicious creatures a menacing glow<br><br>Then, I saw through the tears in my eyes<br><br>The window being smashed by those bloody, gory guys<br><br><br><br>I could feel my breath shortening, my heart beating fast,<br><br>If I didn’t fight back, I knew I wouldn’t last<br><br>My heart became engulfed in flames.<br><br>As I could hear their Master calling out their horrid names;<br><br><br><br>Now Tank, now Crawler, now Decay, now Putrid<br><br>Now Demon, now Hulk, now Creeper, now Rancid<br><br>Into that window, down the hall,<br><br>Now slay, slay, slay them all!<br><br><br><br>I drew the axe back, kept it steady<br><br>As I let them know I was armed and ready<br><br>The zombies slowly staggered towards me,<br>As all my heart and soul were telling me to flee<br><br><br><br>One by one, I chopped them up, and let me tell you it was a great feeling,<br><br>Seeing their limbs being stacked up to the ceiling.<br><br>The line of zombies was never-ending<br><br>Forever and ever, it was always extending<br><br><br><br>He was dressed in all black, with a hood over his face<br><br>He was taller than the rest; wielding a sharp mace<br><br>And then I realized, it must be their Master<br><br>As he staggered towards me, even faster<br><br><br><br>His eyes were black as death, his skin white as snow<br><br>The moonlight made his mace shimmer and glow<br><br>Cuts and scrapes, still bloody and oozing,<br><br>Covered his body, along with some bruising<br><br><br><br>The vicious creature drew back his mace<br><br>As I tried my hardest to keep a straight face<br><br>One clean sweep of my axe,<br><br>And I cut straight through his back<br><br><br><br>I let out a long, relieved sigh<br><br>And looked out the window to see the sunrise sky<br><br>As he lay there, he said to me, bloody and dying,<br><br>“Fight your hardest, or die trying.”<br><br><br>Opinions? :DD