Art Critique?

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• 55klovek

  November 2010 76.184.39.121

  bump

  
• RoyalRaccoon

  November 2010 75.84.62.221

  I think it looks good. You definitely show some knowledge of anatomy. <br>Improvement wise, the back legs aren't level. If you take a ruler and draw a straight line that's level with the front paws, then you should be able to see where the back paws should sit on the ground. ;D

  I'm done with VP. I'll just be around until I get all my dogs and lines placed in good hands. If you want to contact me, please do so through deviantART.
• 55klovek

  December 2010 76.184.39.121

  Thanks so much I will try that next time =D

  
• Mossflower

  December 2010 58.6.95.153

  I like it You could try making the neck a little thicker, like under his jaw

  
• wetnose101

  December 2010 67.164.82.195

  thats a great start! use computer edit to change it up a bit!

  
• 55klovek

  December 2010 76.184.39.121

  Yeah I was going to use Photoshop to line and color it, but my sis Oreogirl crashed her computer which had her tablet and Photoshop installed so I cant use it plus she is on my computer all the time. Though I will try to color it. Maybe