Critique Plez.

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• ImportsandLines

  August 2010 76.184.39.121

  Beautiful Hobs, that picture is very inspiring.

  
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• siebs2010

  August 2010 207.255.100.152

  <span style="font-size:70">Thanks <br>Thats what I thought when I saw it and had<br>draw it!</span>

  
  Training Alexandreian Island Wolve's: 10x4's Caucasian Shepherd Dog's: Importing Stage. Bohemian Shepherds: Importing.
• siebs2010

  August 2010 24.3.74.47

  <a href="http://i33.tinypic.com/fk9xqb.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i33.tinypic.com/fk9xqb.jpg</a><br>A little bit more..

  
  Training Alexandreian Island Wolve's: 10x4's Caucasian Shepherd Dog's: Importing Stage. Bohemian Shepherds: Importing.
• HollyWood

  August 2010 98.179.162.83

  <span style="text-decoration:underline">Very</span> nice ^.^ its cute so far.

  
• siebs2010

  August 2010 24.3.74.47

  <span style="font-size:70">Thanks :}<br>I think everything is a little bit<br>off in the picture.. like the forehead<br>is to big.. his mouth is off xD<br>I'm getting negative about it </span>

  
  Training Alexandreian Island Wolve's: 10x4's Caucasian Shepherd Dog's: Importing Stage. Bohemian Shepherds: Importing.
• lovefrompaige

  August 2010 71.209.149.247

  <span style="font-size:85"><span style="color:#0000FF">VERY nice hobs. I can deff tell this took you a very long time. The only thing I might recremond is maybe adding a glimmer effect to the eye. The whole thing seems kinda dark. I think it would add more of a pop if you added a little shine. . . I don't know if thats the right word.<br><br><a href="http://www.touchnote.com/files/assets/MONK048.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.touchnote.com/files/assets/MONK048.jpg</a><br>See how there's like reflection? And then more shades and stuff. Idk, to me, the eye is like the main focus point. Make it pop and your whole drawing will be even better ^_-</span></span>

  
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• siebs2010

  August 2010 24.3.74.47

  <span style="font-size:70">xD That's what I've been focusing on mostly,<br>because the guy who owns the dog and picture told<br>me that his eyes are so expressive and make the dog..<br>the dog xP the eraser of my pencil is just a little too big<br>and I always end up erasing to much when I try to highlight<br>and plus, the lighting from having to take the picture makes<br>the highlighting thats there barely noticeable.<br>But thankies, I thought I should add more highlight<br>but I wasn't sure </span>

  
  Training Alexandreian Island Wolve's: 10x4's Caucasian Shepherd Dog's: Importing Stage. Bohemian Shepherds: Importing.
• lovefrompaige

  August 2010 71.209.149.247

  <span style="font-size:85"><span style="color:#0000FF">lol Shweet, at least you were thinking the same thing ^_^<br>I can't wait to see it finished!</span></span>

  
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• Mileysmybaby

  September 2010 72.2.165.201

  I love it!

  
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• siebs2010

  September 2010 70.20.82.5

  <span style="font-size:70">thankk yeww <br>Still working on this >.<<br>School/Classes are getting in the way, lol</span>

  
  Training Alexandreian Island Wolve's: 10x4's Caucasian Shepherd Dog's: Importing Stage. Bohemian Shepherds: Importing.