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Critique & Help Please! xD

SimmSimm
edited September 2009 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:darkred">So I'm attempting to draw my breed that I'll be buying this thursday.<br>It's called a Panthalia Lupus, and it is a Gryphon of sorts, but an Eagle x Leopard, with wolf characteristics.<br>This is my fourth attempt, after Evy red-lined the third attempt to help me.<br><br><img src="http://i28.tinypic.com/zto95.jpg"; alt="http://i28.tinypic.com/zto95.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Sorry about the size! :? <br><br>Clearly I haven't done the claws, the other front leg and the wings.<br>I need help with those. Im not sure where to START the other leg, and the claws confuse me. O.o<br>The wings I will start on when the leg/s are done, and I'm happy with the actual lineart.<br>Feathers will also be added after the wings, then I will scan it, ink it, and get someone/s to colour it. (like Dreamy!)<br><br>Please only constructive critique, and try to explain what you mean so I can understand you. :) </span></span>
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  • woodpeckerwoodpecker
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    *beats sim* roaw. Im so jealous.. so many people are getting awesome personal breeds >.> lucky sim! anyways.. back to the lineart, the back on the neck kinda anoys me.. i dunno why. xD look up an eagle claw or something to study when drawing the claw. adding scales to it would be a great idea. maybe the other front leg could be pawing or something? anyhow, i hoped i helped :D
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  • SimmSimm
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    woodpecker wrote:
    *beats sim* roaw. Im so jealous.. so many people are getting awesome personal breeds >.> lucky sim! anyways.. back to the lineart, the back on the neck kinda anoys me.. i dunno why. xD look up an eagle claw or something to study when drawing the claw. adding scales to it would be a great idea. maybe the other front leg could be pawing or something? anyhow, i hoped i helped :D
    <br><br><span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:darkred">I couldnt choose where I wanted the neck line to be, or where it needed to be. I can have it the way it is (vertical) or coming across from the back (horizontal) .. xD<br><br>I'm so excited about getting the breed! I thought I would need to wait a few weeks, but dad's like, as long as it's your money, go right ahead! :D <br><br>With the leg, I'd like it kind of .. in the air, I suppose it seem like it was pawing, or stepping .. or even just posing that way.<br>Ill save some images of their claws so I can study them, and hopefully by this time tomorrow I'll have another BETTER one up! xD</span></span>
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