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Oneshot Story (Just because...)

edited September 2009 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:150"><span style="font-weight:bold">December</span></span><br>By: Nickel<br><br><br><span style="font-style:italic">As cold as the December sky, your eyes breathe life into my own. As cold and chill as the snowy star shine at midnight tonight, you linger in my mind, and catch my breath just as easily as the cold.</span><br><br>I didn’t know much about him at the time. I knew the fiery icy eyes belonged to him, and I knew his family was in close aspects to my own. Of course, his family was prosperous because of blue blood. Mine was in close relation because of business matters. We both attended an advanced private school, but it wasn’t until the frost overcame school grounds that I saw him. I always took shorter routes in the winter for several reasons; One being that they were the only paths that the school cleared off, the other being that I didn’t care much for the cold weather when they restricted the girls to wearing skirts no matter the temperature. I never understood why private schools felt the need to show off extra skin, when I would have been well comfortable with wearing casual jeans and a t-shirt.<br><br>The wind was uncomfortable as usual, as I tried to hold my papers in place against my chest. The wind whipped cold crystals of snow against my unconditional legs and face; luckily, we were given the option of long sleeves. The winter was beautiful in early December, I couldn’t argue with that fact, but I preferred it more on weekends when I was allowed my own attire. My head was facing the ground as I fixed my eyes into the snow below me, concentrating on something other than my classes that were looming ever closer, and of course the chill against my skin. That was when the closeness of our families became clear. I lifted my head just in time to notice I was walking right into someone. His eyes were also distant, staring at the flakes falling from the pale sky. His hands were stuffed angrily in his jacket pockets, and the second I realized I was going to snap him out of a more desirable world, it was already too late. By then I had already felt a connection simply by seeing the flare in his eyes, the icy blue that seemed to match the December theme too easily. The second my shoulder rammed into his, the icy glare of his fell onto me, but he didn’t bother to reach out for me as I stumbled slightly, almost losing a grasp on everything I had been protecting.<br><br>“What are you doing? Watch where you walk,â€
All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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Comments

  • I like it. It definitely holds your attention and makes you wonder whats coming next. I would love to read more if you would be willing to post more. :roll: I like how you kept everything in line without straying off point. You kept the fact that it was winter and cold yet also put in how they met each other. I like that you keep everything in focus.
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  • bah Dx -is jealous- your writing is really good
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  • Trisscar wrote:
    I like it. It definitely holds your attention and makes you wonder whats coming next. I would love to read more if you would be willing to post more. :roll: I like how you kept everything in line without straying off point. You kept the fact that it was winter and cold yet also put in how they met each other. I like that you keep everything in focus.
    <br><br>Thanks ^^ Im still not sure if Im even gonna post more where I originally posted it at xD People there dont care much for the school setting... so xD I tend to stay away from full length stories with that. But, thanks much for the review :D <br><br><br>And, thanks Kro :)
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • o:<br>This....is....SPECTACULAR!
  • lol, thanks :P Dunno that it deserved the upper case, but, Ill take it xD
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Trisscar wrote:
    I like it. It definitely holds your attention and makes you wonder whats coming next. I would love to read more if you would be willing to post more. :roll: I like how you kept everything in line without straying off point. You kept the fact that it was winter and cold yet also put in how they met each other. I like that you keep everything in focus.
    <br><br>Thanks ^^ Im still not sure if Im even gonna post more where I originally posted it at xD People there dont care much for the school setting... so xD I tend to stay away from full length stories with that. But, thanks much for the review :D <br><br><br>And, thanks Kro :)
    <br><br>Well I think you should definitely post more. You have me hooked now and can't just leave me hanging!!! Or can you? Well you can but that would be the most horrible torture. lol. I really like it. And i'm being honest when I say this. From just reading what you posted I would buy the book if there was one I liked it so much. I love books in general but ones that grab my attention like that are awesome and rare to find sometimes. You could perhaps pm me the rest if you don't want to post?
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  • aw, thanks Triss ^^ I'll try to think of something else to go on with that xD Though, pretty much anything else is going to make it full length, lol. I dont think I can handle another full length story (or maybe I can, since Im almost done with my one...)<br><br>=D Thanks much.
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • aw, thanks Triss ^^ I'll try to think of something else to go on with that xD Though, pretty much anything else is going to make it full length, lol. I dont think I can handle another full length story (or maybe I can, since Im almost done with my one...)<br><br>=D Thanks much.
    <br><br>Your welcome! -waits in excitement for whatever else Nickel may post- lol your great at writing from what I can tell. Have you ever written poems or songs before?
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  • Tons :P
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Do what Triss says, and keep writing. xDD <3
  • I write a lot. :D Want to swap poems sometime? I suck at writing songs but I can be pretty good at poems most of the time.
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  • I love it... please post more... it is the best thing i have read since i started the sword of truth series (i still need to get the rest of the books)
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  • Trisscar wrote:
    I write a lot. :D Want to swap poems sometime? I suck at writing songs but I can be pretty good at poems most of the time.
    <br><br><br>Lol, sure xD Im not sure if Im good at poems or not xD No one ever gives me critique for them *shrugs*<br><br><br><br><br>And thanks everyone. :D I will work on a new chapter at school
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Eh I say I'm horrible at poems and such and usually throw them away. But my boyfriend and some friends yelled at me when they found out about me doing that. They now tell me I can't judge my own work cause I'm too harsh on myself. So I'm being forced to put all my poems in a notebook from now on. :roll: I don't show them to anyone usually anyways. Just my parents or boyfriend from time to time. I pmed you Nickel
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