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People WIP--CRIT Pwease ;D

♥Andrea♥♥Andrea♥
edited August 2009 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:75">I'm working on this for Nickle's Contest...<br><a href="http://virtualpups.com/phpbb/viewtopic.php?t=63022"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">This one xD</a><br>Please don't judge the quality of the image...<br>My scanner is being a buttface, so it came out...awkward.<br>Yes, it's red...<br>I find red easier to work with..<br>Buuut, if you want to...blackline(?) it, feel free.<br><img src="http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i136/oh_hi/100_1310.jpg"; alt="http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i136/oh_hi/100_1310.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br>Serious crit wanted xD<br>Be harshhh</span>
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  • lovefrompaigelovefrompaige
    71.209.155.19
    <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">I am NOT good at people so I'll only say what I think can be improved. ^_^<br>The arms, a tad bit longer. . .?<br>And the female, she looks stiff.<br>Maybe having her lean in more? :)<br>Like she's actually tugging on his shirt.<br>Do some action poses. . . <3<br>Like have him hunched a bit since she's tugging on him.<br>Or have him looking over his shoulder like "WTF are you doing?! O.o " lol XD<br>That would be funny but cute! :lol:<br><br><br>I love it so far and I can't wait to see it finished!! ^_^</span></span>
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  • ♥Andrea♥♥Andrea♥
    173.64.122.96
    <span style="font-size:75">Thank youss ;D<br>I think only her...left?<br>No, right?<br>The arm grabbing his shirt is short.<br>OR maybe just oddly proportioned?<br>Like her elbow is too far down..<br>I didn't really notice until you mentioned it...<br>I kinda wanted him to look stiff...<br>He's s'posed to be stoic o.O<br>I didn't quite know how to draw that.<br>Eeep, thanks so much..<br>:]<br></span>
    bella.png
    Thanks Lyc!
    28 weeks along -2/13-
    Have a Layout Contest? PM me!
  • lovefrompaigelovefrompaige
    71.209.155.19
    <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Your welcome! :D lol</span></span>
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  • ♥Andrea♥♥Andrea♥
    173.64.122.96
    :arrow:
    bella.png
    Thanks Lyc!
    28 weeks along -2/13-
    Have a Layout Contest? PM me!
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