Critiques(s) Please?

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• woodpecker

  August 2009 84.71.253.136

  on the umberella banner, above the umberella, there is that background of it, it sort of clashes with the other picture... you could try blending or transparency on it.. other than that, i love them all"

  
  
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• lovefrompaige

  August 2009 71.209.155.19

  <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Hmmm, I like your style of banner making. <br>The only thing I could advise on is maybe on the black and white banner, do<br>the font white and glow? I don't know. . . Oh and the fonts I like. The "Umbrella" part maybe not making that glow yellowish. But if you could make it a white.<br>I know its prolly hard to do that so thats why I'm only giving advice. ^_^<br>All in all, I really like your style. ^_^<br><br>I'll only critique on the banners, since I don't really make layouts or anything. lol </span></span>

  
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• Marseilles

  August 2009 78.111.206.109

  lol thankies guys I see what you mean about the Umbrella banner, I will edit the outer glows etc,.. and see how it turns out

  
• CORY

  August 2009 76.124.114.35

  I love love love all of it.<br>And such a cute boxer.<br>I have 3.<br>they are my life xD

  
• ♥Andrea♥

  August 2009 173.64.122.96

  <span style="font-size:75">I like your banners :]<br>I would agree with what's already been said..<br>Maybe try a different glow color and try blending the pictures together more.<br>_________<br>I do like your layouts, they're simple and clean..<br>Buut, I think having two columns adds a little classy touch xD<br>I also am a big fan of the solid black border.<br>The banners above the layouts are good, but the cutting is a little messy ;]<br>Maybe try zooming in to get a cleaner edge?<br>OR, make a normal banner, just on a larger scale?<br>If you want some coding help to make them look more...expensive?<br>PM me! ;D<br>_________<br>As for the lineart, I can't really crit...<br>I *fail* at drawing..<br>Except I do know anatomy..<br>And yours looks pretty good.<br>-waves-<br>byebyes.<br>Hope something here helped xD<br></span>

  
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• Marseilles

  August 2009 195.226.136.14

  ♥Andrea♥ wrote:

  <span style="font-size:75">I like your banners :]<br>I would agree with what's already been said..<br>Maybe try a different glow color and try blending the pictures together more.<br>_________<br>I do like your layouts, they're simple and clean..<br>Buut, I think having two columns adds a little classy touch xD<br>I also am a big fan of the solid black border.<br>The banners above the layouts are good, but the cutting is a little messy ;]<br>Maybe try zooming in to get a cleaner edge?<br>OR, make a normal banner, just on a larger scale?<br>If you want some coding help to make them look more...expensive?<br>PM me! ;D<br>_________<br>As for the lineart, I can't really crit...<br>I *fail* at drawing..<br>Except I do know anatomy..<br>And yours looks pretty good.<br>-waves-<br>byebyes.<br>Hope something here helped xD<br></span>

  <br><br>Thankies I agree the cutting on the umbrella banner looks a little messy. I didn't really look at it carefully enough. Thankies for the help guys I will keep all of it in mind

  
• Krolak

  August 2009 76.113.244.173

  i lurvs the boxer banner <br>... Dx im not trying to start a fight or anything.. and im not saying you did, but the lineart kinda sorta looks traced.. x-x if its not, then its a smexy lineart.. again. ;; dont be offended. the LAST thing i wanna do is start a fight. -hugs-

  
• Marseilles

  August 2009 195.226.136.14

  Krolak wrote:

  i lurvs the boxer banner <br>... Dx im not trying to start a fight or anything.. and im not saying you did, but the lineart kinda sorta looks traced.. x-x if its not, then its a smexy lineart.. again. ;; dont be offended. the LAST thing i wanna do is start a fight. -hugs-

  <br><br>lol i'm not offended, I have WIP's saved on my computer I draw them scan draw then scan so no misunderstandings happen. I wll post them for you lol

  
• Krolak

  August 2009 76.113.244.173

  Marseilles wrote:

  Krolak wrote:

  i lurvs the boxer banner <br>... Dx im not trying to start a fight or anything.. and im not saying you did, but the lineart kinda sorta looks traced.. x-x if its not, then its a smexy lineart.. again. ;; dont be offended. the LAST thing i wanna do is start a fight. -hugs-

  <br><br>lol i'm not offended, I have WIP's saved on my computer I draw them scan draw then scan so no misunderstandings happen. I wll post them for you lol

  <br><br>haha, thanks Dx i feel bad about sayin that.. but it was bugging the crap outa me. its very well drawn.. hah, thats why i thought that. i would love to see the WIP(s)

  
• Marseilles

  August 2009 88.81.137.182

  lol xD No worries, I have had it brought up before, I will track down the WIP's and load them up.<br><br>I found my first WIP... not sure where the others have gotten too....<br><br><a href="http://i31.tinypic.com/aop3x4.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i31.tinypic.com/aop3x4.jpg</a><br><br>Since all is hand drawnI start by measuring out using circles etc,.. to define where the ribcage will be, the head and the muzzle etc,.. for the legs I draw the circles to measure out there the hocks and pasturns are. After this stage I go over adding more detail such as the legs etc,.. rubbing out lines as I go until I have something that looks somewhat like a dog with the correct anatomy etc,.. lol