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woodpecker · August 2009

Well, i tried to make something good.. and totally failed xD it sucks.. anyhow, with a billion good graphic artists out there.. maybe you could give me some tips/crit? any comments appreciated

<img src="http://i733.photobucket.com/albums/ww338/woodpeckerart/wolfban.gif"; alt="http://i733.photobucket.com/albums/ww338/woodpeckerart/wolfban.gif"; class="bb-image" /> please, no stealing, i cant be bothered to put a watermark on it.. if you do steal, ill give chibi a high caffine drink and set her on you =]

lovefrompaige · August 2009

One thing I would do is make that eye more transparent.

The wolf in the middle, I would make that the top layer. The wolf in the corner, maybe a little more transparent and mess around with the filters too.

Nice blending. ^_^ Add some brushes if your feeling bold too.

woodpecker · August 2009

ok thanks xD o.0 i just need to find more pictures

lovefrompaige · August 2009

Find some nature pictures like tree branches or leaves or even a river or droplet

Then blend those in with low transparency and it should look really good. ^_^ Just some more advice.

â™¥Andreaâ™¥ · August 2009

I actually think it's really good. And feel the need to dispute BobKitten.. xD Sorry BobKitty... But I like the eye as the top layer and not transparent. I think it's bold and eye-catching. -No pun intended- xD What I generally do to make pictures from multiple sources look more cohesive is to filter them all with the same filter. Aaand, as BobKitty suggested, maybe overlaying a nature picture. Buut, I tend to keep one element (such as the eye) above the transparent touch because I feel it provides a stable focal point. o.O If that's really confusing, sorry. haha

lovefrompaige · August 2009

I actually think it's really good. And feel the need to dispute BobKitten.. xD Sorry BobKitty... But I like the eye as the top layer and not transparent. I think it's bold and eye-catching. -No pun intended- xD What I generally do to make pictures from multiple sources look more cohesive is to filter them all with the same filter. Aaand, as BobKitty suggested, maybe overlaying a nature picture. Buut, I tend to keep one element (such as the eye) above the transparent touch because I feel it provides a stable focal point. o.O If that's really confusing, sorry. haha

I don't mean like completly making it transparent, just not so bright. I think that if it was transparent, maybe around the 70's or 80's it would add mystery. I guess it all depends on what theme your aiming for. If you were to put the image one layer back and bring out the wolf in the middle, it would make the eye not only look more blended together, but also maybe make the wolf in the middle look like its poping out of the pic. Thats just me. And yes, I would make all images the same filter. Just mess around with that and find what you like. Sorry, I just had to speak my mind. I get what your saying Andi but I had to explain myself more I guess. :P

â™¥Andreaâ™¥ · August 2009

lovefrompaige wrote:

I actually think it's really good. And feel the need to dispute BobKitten.. xD Sorry BobKitty... But I like the eye as the top layer and not transparent. I think it's bold and eye-catching. -No pun intended- xD What I generally do to make pictures from multiple sources look more cohesive is to filter them all with the same filter. Aaand, as BobKitty suggested, maybe overlaying a nature picture. Buut, I tend to keep one element (such as the eye) above the transparent touch because I feel it provides a stable focal point. o.O If that's really confusing, sorry. haha

 I don't mean like completly making it transparent, just not so bright. I think that if it was transparent, maybe around the 70's or 80's it would add mystery. I guess it all depends on what theme your aiming for. If you were to put the image one layer back and bring out the wolf in the middle, it would make the eye not only look more blended together, but also maybe make the wolf in the middle look like its poping out of the pic. Thats just me. And yes, I would make all images the same filter. Just mess around with that and find what you like. Sorry, I just had to speak my mind. I get what your saying Andi but I had to explain myself more I guess. :P

Yeah, no hating here ;] I just wanted to put in my two-sense. I really like the eye 100% opaque. I think it's because it's such a high-quality picture and they're so hard to find xD I totally get what you're saying about the center picture.. I just really like the eye. hahaha ilu BobCat!! ;D Okay, sorry woodpecker, I'll stop spamming your thread now xD

lovefrompaige · August 2009

Yeah, no hating here ;] I just wanted to put in my two-sense. I really like the eye 100% opaque. I think it's because it's such a high-quality picture and they're so hard to find xD I totally get what you're saying about the center picture.. I just really like the eye. hahaha ilu BobCat!! ;D Okay, sorry woodpecker, I'll stop spamming your thread now xD

lol ilu2 Andi

And yus, I see what you mean. Good luck with the image Woody!! ^_^ You should post it again when your all the way done

I wanna see how it turned out -stares at screen- XD

woodpecker · August 2009

oh jees o.0 i flattened that image so i cant work on it anymore.. ima making a tiger one at the mo.. but then ill find you same images and re-make the wolf one for you bobeh xD

SylverWyndIV · August 2009

Hmm, this is very nice ! I reccomend lowering the opacity on the wolf in the middle . Then blend the two other wolves together, and make the eye more transparent. Maybe use a few brushes to add to the creativity of the work !

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