Citique???

<span style="font-size:75">Critique..<br>On the following xD<br>I need it really bad.<br>So please be harsh..<br>But constructive.<br>Does that make sense??<br>Okay, so, my scanner is being a poopface..<br>So sorry for the suckish quality...<br>I'll try to fight it tomorrow.<br>It's a horse...Not really a specific breed,<br>For my sister's account on another game.<br>I personally think it's a fail..<br>But my sister thought it was good..<br>So I just wanted to see if you all could...<br>Well, tell me what's wrong with it..<br>So I can tell her "I told you so!"<br>And so I can fix it xD<br><span style="font-weight:bold">w/lines</span><br><img src="http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i136/oh_hi/8-30-08019.jpg"; alt="http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i136/oh_hi/8-30-08019.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br>Some of those need to be taken away/ added...<br>I know...<br>And sorry that it's in colored pencil and sharpie xD<br>GIMP...grrr.<br>Generally, my computer is deciding to be mean!!<br><span style="font-weight:bold">w/o lines</span><br><img src="http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i136/oh_hi/8-30-08018.jpg"; alt="http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i136/oh_hi/8-30-08018.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br>Feel free to redline or just old-fashioned critt...<br>:]<br>Comments also appreciated..<br>But don' lie to meh, people!!</span>