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Nightmares. (Written by: Shadow)

edited February 2010 in General Discussion
(I've decided not to let this nighmare pass!)<br><br> <span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold"><span style="font-size:150">Prologue</span></span></span><br><br> As I run, looking for a way, I realize I'm trapped, doomed to death. I take my last look in a room where there are no windows, no doors, no life, no light, nothing. <br><br> <span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold"><span style="font-size:150">Death</span></span></span><br><br> I slipped from under my feet and was dragged away. Into the den of the creature who captured me. <br> I could feel it's cold, eerie breath on my neck, it's needle-like nails scratching into my back. As I thought that I was going to die, the creature lifted me up and sat me down. It was too soon to think that I had good fortune, the pale almost gray skinned creature embraced me with twig-like hands and slowly delivered my death. It sent it's needle-like nails into my heart and ripped it out with no mercy.<br><br> <span style="font-size:150"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Rebirth</span></span></span> <br><br> I awoke to the creature, staring at me with big, red eyes. It told me that he had turned me into his own kind. <br> I looked at my hands. What used to be plump, human hands, had turned into ill looking, pale hands. <br> At first, I was horrified and tried to run away. I ran for the nearest light source, but soon realized that sunlight was bad for me, for it burned my skin. I sat in the darkness of the eerie house and the creature came to reassure me. The creature, he tought me how to survive, how to suck the blood out of other creatures and live of it. I later learned his name, Iduss. <br>Iduss tought me how to hunt humans and create more of us, he once said that we are Carvanian Vampires. Our appearance, appears sickly, pale almost green skin, and most commonly blood red eyes.<br><br> <span style="font-size:150"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Carvanian Vampire</span></span></span><br><br> As I walked through the house that I could only remember vaguely, before I was dragged to Iduss's den. I found a small human child, I remembered how I always wanted a child for myself, how I longed to graduate high school, and go off to college, and get married. The child, a girl, she had long rich brown hair, and bright hazel green eyes. She had tripped, and was just sitting there rocking back and forth, I could feel an eerie presence in the room.<br><br> <span style="font-size:150"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Daughter</span></span></span><br><br> I grabbed the girl up in my pale arms, and brought her to my new den, made of rocks, cushion, and twigs. She squirmed, but I was too strong for her, for Carvanian Vampires are un-naturally strong.<br> Sadly I remembered, when I was in this situation. I embraced the girl, and slowly sunk my teeth into her fragile neck. Then, set her down on a soft cushion, to die. I then waited for her to turn into one of us. <br><br> <span style="font-size:150"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Child Birth</span></span></span><br><br> The girl, Hailey, I named her. Finally awoke, shocked to be alive. She gave me a terrified glance and curled into a tight ball, trying to ignore all this going around her, as she whimpered and cryed. She had changed alot in appearance since my bite. She was still a child, but looked ill, and she had somehow kept her beautiful eyes. I told her that she had become one of me and that I'd be her mother, Danica, I told her was my name. <br><br> <span style="font-size:150"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Home School</span></span></span><br><br> I picked up Hailey and took her into the dark forest where Iduss tought me how to hunt, and found a small ragged mouse and told Hailey to bite into it and suck it's blood. I tracked down another mouse shortly after, and showed her how to, and she followed, pefectly. <br> Next, I showed her how to turn a human into us, and told her that we are Carvanian Vampires. Which amazingly Hailey had managed to keep her gorgeous green eyes. It took us a week to find a human but Hailey accomplished the task within three tries.<br><br> <span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold"> <span style="font-size:150">Rage</span></span></span><br><br> After done our daily feeding, Hailey and I, walked to Iduss's den. I've decided that I want to show Iduss my daughter. <br> Iduss awoke from a deep sleep and looked at Hailey.<br> "This is my daughter." I told him,<br>Iduss glanced at me with shock and looked back at Hailey.<br> "She has green eyes, and is a child!" He screamed in terror.<br> "I know." I told him quietly.<br> "This is bad, Carvanian Vampire children never grow up, and are left in their form for all eternity."<br> "We're immortal?" Hailey butted in quickly,<br> "Yes, we are all immortal, but you are special, you will be in a child's form and more powerful."<br><br> <span style="font-size:150"><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Forgiveness</span></span></span><br><br> Danica, Hailey, and Iduss, walked away from Iduss's dark den covered with blood. They went to the dark room where all the Carvanian Vampires talk and make jokes, like normal people socializing. We had intoduced Hailey and one other Caranian child came up to Hailey. Like Hailey, the other child had their human eyes, except his were a almost violet. Hailey introduced herself to the boy, and the boy introduced himself to Hailey, his name was Lukcan.<br> Lukcan has been a Carvanian for about four years now, and told Hailey all about being the odd one out. Lukcan's voice was very scratchy sounding and was somewhat hard to understand.<br> "I have been a Carvanian for about four years now, and I have found that being a child in this world has become useful." he told Hailey.<br> "Oh yeah, how?" Hailey asked,<br> "I am able to lure adult humans in easily and turn them into us, as you can see."<br> About six Carvanians came forward, all nodding at Lukcan. Which one happened to be his mother, Leesa.<br> "I bit my mother, short after I was bit, because I felt that I didn't want to let her mourn me." Lukcan said.<br><br>
<br><br>*EDITED TO 2nd PART!*<br>2 More People and I'll put the 3rd part!<br>as long as I get people wanting new parts<br>I'll write them!
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  • :arrow: <br>I guess people don't like it even though the beginning was based on my real nightmare
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  • seems like its written pretty well, <br>but personally for myself I can't read horror,<br>or whatever type you'd like to call that xD<br><br>good job though.
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  • lol thank you<br>so all i need is 2 more people
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  • :shock: must know what happens!<br><br>Well you captivated me and i'm hard to captivate :D<br>Great writing, though could do with a little bit more discription... :D
  • yes i know it lacks description...but the middle is about when i woke up...i had that nightmare when i spent the night at my friends' house. lol<br><br>I edited it some<br><br>*runs to the big text and cuts and scissors and markers and done*<br>*edited* more detallies<br>we just need one more person! :D
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  • My cousins name is Danica :]
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  • lol<br>thats awesome!<br>i came up with that name from thin air<br>and i thought it sounded pretty<br><br>i bet you thought i was gonna say crap because it rymes with rap but im better that
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  • Gimmeee<br>theeee<br>secconndd<br>parrtt <br><br>o-o;<br><br>-was cut off at a bad time-<br>I need more D:
    i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
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  • lol<br>i will write it nowwwww<br> :twisted:
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  • Do it do it :o
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  • More :O
    i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
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  • okay okay.<br>lmao<br>I'm thinking of what to write about nowww...<br>I should have more posted by next wednesday at most
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  • Do you guys still like this story-thing? jw cuz i could continue it
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  • Whoa! That was weird. As I read it I was like....I've read this before.....has this been posted before? Or is it just me.....and then I realized how old it was. :lol: <br><br>But, I do like it, even though I usaully hate those kinds of stories. It's very well writeen and kinda interesting. I'd like it if you added more. :)
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  • hahah :lol: <br>ill write more as soon as i have time :P
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