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critique..

dachshund girldachshund girl
edited July 2009 in Artist Alley
<img src="http://i29.tinypic.com/vnkzr7.png"; alt="http://i29.tinypic.com/vnkzr7.png"; class="bb-image" /><br><a href="http://i29.tinypic.com/vnkzr7.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i29.tinypic.com/vnkzr7.png</a><br><br>Please post any comments or suggestions. Thanks!
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  • UnknownDreamlandUnknownDreamland
    96.234.184.181
    <span style="font-size:75">Anatomically, that is REALLY good! There's just a few things that throw me off. The paws are a bit.. wonky? The tail fur is spiky, and the two eyes look different sizes? The left eye(the dog's left) also looks like it has a bit of black from the dog it it.<br>Also, about the paws. The dog's left leg is clearly showing three toes, while the right leg- which is closer to us- is only clearly showing two, and hinting at a third making it almost seem duck footed or something. And the right leg behind it clearly shows four, so as they are at the same angle, they should be the same.</span>
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  • dachshund girldachshund girl
    71.63.170.227
    Dreamland wrote:
    <span style="font-size:75">Anatomically, that is REALLY good! There's just a few things that throw me off. The paws are a bit.. wonky? The tail fur is spiky, and the two eyes look different sizes? The left eye(the dog's left) also looks like it has a bit of black from the dog it it.<br>Also, about the paws. The dog's left leg is clearly showing three toes, while the right leg- which is closer to us- is only clearly showing two, and hinting at a third making it almost seem duck footed or something. And the right leg behind it clearly shows four, so as they are at the same angle, they should be the same.</span>
    <br><br>Thanks Dreamy! As you can tell I'm not that good at paws.
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  • UnknownDreamlandUnknownDreamland
    96.234.184.181
    <span style="font-size:75">I'm working on a walkthrough for those. >.> Chibi forced me.</span>
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