Wild Layout Critique

98rtsy · June 2009

My new friend AWD ^-^ WiLd OnE^-^ has really been working hard on her layouts. She cannot post them on here, as her account hasn't been approved yet. So, she asked me to post them. These are a few of her latest works. <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=272207&view=2"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/viewkennel.php?k ... 207&view=2</a> <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=277354"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=277354</a> & <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=266077&view=2"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/viewkennel.p ... 077&view=2</a> I personally like these. They are great for her first layouts. Wild One wants both comments and critiques. Thanks. :]

MondyFlax · June 2009

I like them. But.. They're just codes pasted from another site.. so honestly she hasn't 'worked that hard'... just my two cents. But I like them. They'd be better if she modified them to make them her own.

98rtsy · June 2009

THey are her codings. Seriously, I was working with her. THey aren't from a site.

lovefrompaige · June 2009

The first one, the next thing you should help her with is try putting the stud box inside of the layout. You know what I mean? Make it fit. . . I love the blues though. Very nice.

The second one, I don't know what the lines across and below the layout are for but it seems to me like they don't need to be there. . . If they're suppose to be there, then ignore me lol

Love the colors and I like how she kept the main banner small.

The third layout maybe fancyer font for headers. . . And less headers. . . It seems like the layout is over crowded. Over all, VERY well done! I'm not a layout expert but I do like buying them and I'm just giving a "future" costumer's point of view. . . Maybe? lol Tell her I like them.

98rtsy · June 2009

Will do. FOr the lines in the second one, I'm not sure what you mean about the lines. Maybe a screenshot to show us?

lovefrompaige · June 2009

<a href="http://i39.tinypic.com/2wdrrjc.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i39.tinypic.com/2wdrrjc.jpg</a> The grey line on the top. And the grey one on the bottom. . . On top of her siggy (C) AWD

98rtsy · June 2009

Oh. Yea, they are supposed to be there.

lovefrompaige · June 2009

Ok, I wasn't sure so I thought I would point it out.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

I like them... the third one especially.

98rtsy · June 2009

She is loving this. :] SHe thanks you all.

MondyFlax · June 2009

Eh.. I'll just leave that behind. Wouldn't want to get in trouble :roll:

But one more crit. is not so vibrant colors XD more soft. It hurts Mondeh's eyes XD

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