Layout Crit?

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

I would like some critique on the layouts I've made. Would anyone buy these? <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=146304"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=146304</a> <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=167485"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=167485</a> <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=165958"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=kennel/view&id=165958</a>;

Lukari · June 2009

I like them

You should try making the headers a bit more smaller. etc.

98rtsy · June 2009

I agree. They look good, just make the text smaller.

TheProtector · June 2009

I like em'

MondyFlax · June 2009

I agree. Text smaller, and maybe more calm colors, and maybe if you can make it not go across the whole page

Other than that, very good.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Thanks guys! I'll make one w/smaller text and stuff and post it.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Is this better guys? <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=177837"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=177837</a> I tried to make it not take up so much of the page and get it more organized.

And add smaller text.

98rtsy · June 2009

The text is still HUGE.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Okay, how 'bout now. I -think- I fixed it... What font are you seeing? On my computer, it's 'Buffied', and now seems REALLY small, but I think the reason the font is so huge is because you were seeing a different font... maybe? :?

MondyFlax · June 2009

I don't see any difference on any of 'em..

98rtsy · June 2009

<a href="http://i40.tinypic.com/105qhko.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">This</a> is what I see.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Okay, are they fixed now? I changed the fonts to regular fonts that come with most computers.

lovefrompaige · June 2009

Something that rosheia told me a long time ago is when your making any kind of art, its great to have the headings or your main text all fancy, but the subtext, needs to be simple. Other wise it takes away from the eyes. . . I love how your font for the headers is nice and fancy but where the people type should just be nice and clean. Thats a good size too now. You fixed it.

Great job too! I love the banner :shock:

98rtsy · June 2009

I agree. It's excellent, just make all the text other than the headers more simple.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

okay thanks guys! I think I finally got it -knock on wood XD- so, is this good? <a href="http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=177837"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://www.virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=177837</a> It -should- look something like this. <a href="http://i491.photobucket.com/albums/rr273/twilightgirl93/prntscreenlayout.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i491.photobucket.com/albums/rr273/twilightgirl93/prntscreenlayout.jpg</a> Does it look like that to everybody? Or at least close enough?

lovefrompaige · June 2009

<a href="http://i39.tinypic.com/15x076w.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i39.tinypic.com/15x076w.jpg</a> For me it looks like this. . . On your computer, it looks nice. . . I'm using FireFox. :?

98rtsy · June 2009

lovefrompaige wrote:

<a href="http://i39.tinypic.com/15x076w.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i39.tinypic.com/15x076w.jpg</a> For me it looks like this. . . On your computer, it looks nice. . . I'm using FireFox. :?

That's what I was using. You need IE for it to look really good. THat's how most are for some reason.

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Hm... I don't really know how to fix that... but thanks!

lovefrompaige · June 2009

Ohhh, I see now. Lovely!!

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Thanks! So, do yall think I could sell them?

lovefrompaige · June 2009

For sure

98rtsy · June 2009

DEF!

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Thanks BobbyKitteh! Thanks jr.terriers! I think I'll go fix the other ones and see if I can sell some tomorrow.

98rtsy · June 2009

I might buy one for my shared club. PM me when you are open. :]

twilightgirl93 · June 2009

Okay, thanks jr.terriers!

MondyFlax · June 2009

Amazing Twilly! You've improved in like two days XD

twilightgirl93 · July 2009

Thanks Mondeh! I gotta find time to make a selling post... as soon as I finish meh chores XD.

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