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random short stories by kels :D

KelseyKelsey
edited July 2009 in General Discussion
I write random short stories and I want y'all to read 'em and rate 'em!<br><br><span style="font-style:italic"><span style="font-size:200">Soccer</span></span><br><br>The ball screamed past my face towards the guarded goal. David-the most popular kid in the 7th grade at Milton Middle School- took a leap in front of the ball and it slammed onto his chest, in between his waiting arms. I stomped my foot and grunted, ashamed I missed the ball. He cradled the ball and drop-kicked it to midfield where all of the other players were waiting. The crowd cheered and clapped, amazed at David’s kick. “Nice try, Bella.â€
Michael Raymond <3
10.10.10 10:10 pm <3

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  • 98rtsy98rtsy
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    Nice stories. Lot's of details. I would really like to see them extend into possibly a chapter story.
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  • KelseyKelsey
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    Thanks.<br>I'll think about it :D
    Michael Raymond <3
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  • KelseyKelsey
    75.187.179.52
    bumpp
    Michael Raymond <3
    10.10.10 10:10 pm <3
  • iluvdogs111iluvdogs111
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    These are really good! Very descriptive. I agree, making them into chapter books would be awesome! I esspecially like "Soccer" and "Kayla Jean." :D
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  • KelseyKelsey
    75.187.179.52
    iluvdogs111 wrote:
    These are really good! Very descriptive. I agree, making them into chapter books would be awesome! I esspecially like "Soccer" and "Kayla Jean." :D
    <br><br>Oh why thank you! Do you mean actual chapter books or just chapter stories?
    Michael Raymond <3
    10.10.10 10:10 pm <3
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