Story!?[ch. 1/2/3 added]

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• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  :arrow:

  
• CORY

  June 2009 76.124.114.35

  love it <br><3<br>I think this needs published

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  hah. xD but tiffer... i have only shown the first 3 chapters.. [and the 3rd is still under 1,000 words] annddd.. Dx im kinda stuck in the middle of chapter 5. xD<br><br><br> :arrow:

  
• iluvdogs111

  June 2009 66.66.72.235

  Post more, post more! This is a great story!

  
  Goals: 13/50million VPC
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  hah. xD i havent finished editing chapter 3 though! i'm working on typing ch 4 ;] then i have to edit it

  
• MondyFlax

  June 2009 75.142.236.106

  -clings-<br><br>Gimme more XD

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  -clung to- xD i'll hopefully get the 3rd chapter done and the fourth one done tomorrow ;]

  
• MondyFlax

  June 2009 75.142.236.106

  -lurks-

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  o__o; no hijacking this! -stuffs mondy in a bag-

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  :arrow:

  
• DustyVinci

  June 2009 12.119.145.114

  =O I didn't know you were posting it here! I was looking out on da xD<br><br>But OMG I loved reading this! I wanna see the next chapter!! I almost cried when I read chapter 1 ;; But seriously, if you make the chapters a little longer, you should totally try to publish this
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  ;o ty.. o.o; does everyone seriously think that it could be published?

  
• MondyFlax

  June 2009 75.142.236.106

  -lurkstalks the other way-

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  o__o whats with the lurkstalking?

  
• MondyFlax

  June 2009 75.142.236.106

  I'm waiting for more! so I have to lurk/stalk this and keep it bumped up so I don't loose it xD

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  ;o im workin on the third chapterrr

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  ;o<br>o;<br><br> :arrow:

  
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  June 2009 72.65.195.239

  needs to see more! :shock: -eye twitches a little- I should probably stalk this too... o.0<br><br>btw-ima steal all your thunder krow. I'm posting mi first chapter sometime soon. -nods head- hope ya don't mind..though it will be on mi own post..

  
  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  xD why would i mind...? I am just shocked that people think that its good enough to be published.. after i fix it up of course XD

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  -slacker- D; ack. i didnt work on it at all todayy. ;-; stupid writers block -dies-

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  o.e 1st chapter updated again.. -lazzyyy- ;-; i PROMISE i'll edit more tomorrow when i have time D;

  
• MondyFlax

  June 2009 75.142.236.106

  -stalks-

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  June 2009 72.65.195.239

  -looks back and forth- Nuuu!!! o.o you can't be lazy krow! we need to see moorrreeee!!!!! :shock: -eye twitches a little more than last time-

  
  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  o____o; butbut.. i has writers block! -gives nickel writers block- >] im innocent O:]

  
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  June 2009 72.65.195.239

  xD

  
  
• MondyFlax

  June 2009 75.142.236.106

  -stalks the other way-<br>XD

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  o__o; no hijacking! ;;

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  :arrow:

  
• Krolak

  June 2009 76.113.244.173

  :arrow:

  
• Layout

  June 2009 75.128.198.193

  *cough* I'm going to stalk it too >D *stalks*