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Just need some critique here>>

jennifer27jennifer27
edited June 2009 in Artist Alley
Okay will this is about my third lineart ever... (my first actual good one), so I thought I would share it with all of you vp players. (btw, Amara Lougher is me on VHR).<br><br><br><img src="http://i43.tinypic.com/2eb8oia.jpg"; alt="http://i43.tinypic.com/2eb8oia.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Grulla Draft
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  • BertonBerton
    67.53.236.254
    Hrm I really like it but the legs seem funny to me, but im not a drawer nor a horse person
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  • DiamondPuppy0809DiamondPuppy0809
    99.199.92.26
    It just says "Colored by Amara Lougher", did you draw it, too?
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  • MondyFlaxMondyFlax
    75.142.236.106
    I like it, The head is pretty darn good, but the legs look a little too short, and the hooves remind me of dog paws.<br><br>But, other than that I like it a lot
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  • UnknownDreamlandUnknownDreamland
    96.234.250.150
    <span style="font-size:75">Didn't Bara on VHR draw that? :/<br>That's her signature by the hoof.</span>
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  • SilversketchesSilversketches
    99.224.168.66
    I think maybe she meant she coloured it, not drew it. XD
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  • jennifer27jennifer27
    75.106.192.56
    Yeah guys I just colored it... lol. But thanks for the coloring comments! lol
    "If I could go back in time, wouldn't change a damn thing in my life. Love the dumb things we do when we're young, but the best is yet to come."
  • TheProtectorTheProtector
    76.20.128.121
    SEE?!? I told you =P haha jk lylas Jennifer!
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  • jennifer27jennifer27
    75.106.192.59
    TheProtector wrote:
    SEE?!? I told you =P haha jk lylas Jennifer!
    <br>Ya I know... :D
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  • UnknownDreamlandUnknownDreamland
    96.234.250.150
    <span style="font-size:75">Ah, well that's not linearting. c: Lineart = the lines. You colored. Just to remove the confusion.<br><br>Well, I'm not a horse color expert. But shading wise, it lacks.</span>
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  • DeathWishDeathWish
    92.21.242.42
    Dreamland wrote:
    <span style="font-size:75">Ah, well that's not linearting. c: Lineart = the lines. You colored. Just to remove the confusion.<br><br>Well, I'm not a horse color expert. But shading wise, it lacks.</span>
    <br><br>I agree with Dreamy :3<br>More shades, I can see the start of some which is great :D just build on them! Shadows can ALWAYS be darker, and higlights can ALWAYS be lighter, it's just rather daunting to begin with :3<br><br>In a way, learn to lose control, lol. Sure, when you start to add super dark shadows that are almost black if will look fugly but dont give up! When you start adding highlighs and blending you will start to see the difference x3<br><br>Also, the face is kinda odd, the way you coloured it, the darker colour wouldnt come that far up, and it need more blending :D<br><br>Dont be afraid to use the smudge tool if you want to! Regardless of what people say [and I know quite a few people on VHR do say this] but smudging is by no means cheating x3<br><br>I dunno how else I can help but if there is anything else you want to improve just ask, i'll be glad to help :D
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