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Krolak · May 2009

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

not really semi-failage. heh. but i would just look up more on anatomy. for the lion the head would need to be a good deal shorter, most/all felines have rather short muzzles compared to other mammals. for the moldy moose hound's head needs to be smaller to fit the proportions of the body, unless you would rather take time to make the whole body bigger. the ear would need to start down farther off the head instead of off the top of the head. the antlers need to be wider, try looking at a moose's. the antlers you have resemble deer antlers more than moose antlers. moose antlers have a palm and then the points coming out of the palm and are rather wide. also you only have antlers it looks like on only one side of the dog's head. if i had more time (i have to get ready for taekwondo) i would ask you if you wanted a redline or something, or i would add a few more crit and comments.

Krolak · May 2009

femalevamp14- xD I have just started drawing.. but that has nothing to do with anything XDD but as to the head of the lioness: i know the muzzle is too long xDD and as to the head of the moldy moose hound:

the antlers arent really supposed to be a deer's or a moose's antlers ._. i tried to draw a mooses rack and i failed at it.. so i just did what i could.. xD some red lineing on them would help (if i sound rude or mean in any of these i'm not trying to o.o; it just comes out that way when i'm pointing things out x3)

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

ill attempt a quick redline on the moose hound thinga ma bobber. lol. i have 10 minutes before i have to leave to taekwondo coz i got done faster than i expected even though mi microwave kinda blew up on me so i had a cold dinner. xD

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

gah, i gotta go but ill do one up by tomarrow.

Krolak · May 2009

:arrow: **new ones added**

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

i like the clouded/snow leopard. only thing i see majorly wrong is that the tail isnt suppose to have a tuff and is usually fluffier/thicker. i just got done with mi civics project and did a real quick redline, it may not be perfect but it makes the points. <img src="http://i39.tinypic.com/29xb53q.jpg"; alt="http://i39.tinypic.com/29xb53q.jpg"; class="bb-image" /> ps. im not great with hooves and i ran out of rooms to put a full rack. hope it helps?

Krolak · May 2009

femalevamp14 wrote:

i like the clouded/snow leopard. only thing i see majorly wrong is that the tail isnt suppose to have a tuff and is usually fluffier/thicker. i just got done with mi civics project and did a real quick redline, it may not be perfect but it makes the points. <img src="http://i39.tinypic.com/29xb53q.jpg"; alt="http://i39.tinypic.com/29xb53q.jpg"; class="bb-image" /> ps. im not great with hooves and i ran out of rooms to put a full rack. hope it helps?

haha thanks. :oops: and on the clouded leopard i have NO idea what i was thinking on the tail >.<;; but other than the tail, is everything pretty close to the actual body structure and all that jazz?

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

one other thing, you drew the head and chest as a full on side view but the body isnt from the same angle. i think that if you show less of the back legs that it should fix that.

Krolak · May 2009

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Krolak · May 2009

:arrow: anyone?

ps. another one added

Krolak · May 2009

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GAK04 · May 2009

well for starters, i really love your style. it's unique. it's cute.

and now onto the individual pictures...

Krolak wrote:

<img src="http://th04.deviantart.com/fs42/300W/i/2009/138/a/5/Lioness_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; alt="http://th04.deviantart.com/fs42/300W/i/2009/138/a/5/Lioness_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

the dew claw area seems a little random. Like, yes, it is suppose to be there but I think it's the size that seems a little off. Or maybe the shape. Try making it more round perhaps instead of...pointy? And, the lion has a slightly emaciated look. I'm guessing it's a lioness, right? Well, perhaps give it a more roundish belly. Lionesses seem to have round bellies. And try making it thicker around where the shoulder blade is popping out. If you look at pictures, there isn't a distinct bump like that. Yes, the shoulder is visible, but there it is more leveled than what you have. The snout could be a little smaller, I'm sure. And also, make the ears more round. Lions have round ears. The tail could maybe be a little thicker than what it is? not too sure. The paws, overall are okay. The toes could be a little shorter, they look a little too long. and maybe make them look a little more "bubbly". Oh, and if you look at the picture, the legs are not leveled. The front two are shorter than the back two...it sort of looks like the lion is, stepping up or is standing on higher ground and on lower ground. not sure what you were going for there?

Krolak wrote:

<img src="http://th05.deviantart.com/fs42/300W/i/2009/137/4/8/o_o_MOLDY_MOOSE_HOUND_ATTACK_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; alt="http://th05.deviantart.com/fs42/300W/i/2009/137/4/8/o_o_MOLDY_MOOSE_HOUND_ATTACK_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

hm, okay. moose are slightly thick and some hounds tend to be a little thicker too. so i think the neck should be slightly thicker than what it is, especially by the front arms/shoulder-neck area. the shoulder blade bump should have a bigger, wider hump... Hmm. the tail seems a little odd. Moose have short tail stumps that fall to the ground and basically "blend" in with the rump. and the tail shouldn't be as "ruffly" as it is and it should have some sort of, elliptical/pointed oval shape such as a vesica. The antlers were already addressed. the ear, hm. well for a moose, the ears are up slightly and hounds can either have droopy or erect. If you choose to stick with droopy, i would move the ear below the beginning of the antler instead of it being tucked behind the antler. i think the size should also be increased. the dewlap, overall is good, but it should be a wee bit thicker and have a more parallelogram-type shape. Exhibit A - <a href="http://i43.tinypic.com/50hzxt.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">Clickith pwease.</a> As for the hoof area, moose have more of, what would you call it...a toed knuckle? Not sure. But it's not like a deer. Extend the hooves out a bit and maybe have an "overlapish" look. Sort of like <a href="http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_clP3EQMvtYw/SYk-cyskGwI/AAAAAAAAA7w/pCMi-EcKrOw/s320/moose+hoof+vert+Web.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">this</a> but not quite as long. the slots/separate knuckles should be something like <a href="http://www.fun-with-pictures.com/image-files/moose.gif"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">this</a> and they should be pointed like the feet on <a href="http://jackofalltradesblog.com/wp-content/uploads/2008/05/moose_afb.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">this</a> one. and i think that's it for that one...phew.

Krolak wrote:

<img src="http://th01.deviantart.com/fs44/300W/i/2009/139/4/6/Random_Dog_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; alt="http://th01.deviantart.com/fs44/300W/i/2009/139/4/6/Random_Dog_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

again, the dewclaw is a little odd in this one and the level of the legs is off too. the eye seems to be a little too slanted upward. maybe have it slant downward a little or just have it horizontal. the neck seems a little long on this one. the tail is fine. hm, maybe to add a more...distinct look, add the "knee" onto the back legs of the dog like <a href="http://i40.tinypic.com/21l1slt.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">this</a>. hmm. and that might be it. oh, remember...bubbly toes.

Krolak wrote:

<img src="http://th09.deviantart.com/fs44/300W/i/2009/139/5/5/Clouded_Leopard_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; alt="http://th09.deviantart.com/fs44/300W/i/2009/139/5/5/Clouded_Leopard_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

Ou, I realllyyy like this one. You did very good on this piece. Okay, the tuft was already mentioned so I'll just skip that. to me, the eyes seem to be a little too close to the center of the face. If the cat would be looking straight at you, it would be like <a href="http://i43.tinypic.com/vzauls.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">this</a> [according to your picture] but it should be more like <a href="http://i43.tinypic.com/ehhfdc.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">this</a>. ha ha, please excuse the many errors of the examples. i was just demonstrating the space between the eyes. the ears should be a little more round...and maybe wider towards the top. and there really is no arch in the back like there is in a lion. the back of a leopard has more of a slight hump/straight line. The shoulder blade pop out is great, that's a key part in felids. and again, with the leg leveling. just throwing that out there.

Krolak wrote:

<img src="http://th08.deviantart.com/fs45/300W/i/2009/141/f/1/Another_Random_Dog_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; alt="http://th08.deviantart.com/fs45/300W/i/2009/141/f/1/Another_Random_Dog_by_labradorgirl13.jpg"; class="bb-image" />

okay, i think this one is my favorite. by far. â™¥ the placement of the eye is great, the leg leveling is much better. the muzzle is very nice and the ears fit proportionally. the bandanna was a nice touch too,

the only thing i would say to fix would be the tail. Towards the beginning of the tail/rump area, it's way to thick. Do you see <a href="http://i41.tinypic.com/24ng2fm.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">here</a> how the tail is the same size throughout the whole thing, beginning to end. Well, that's how you picture should be. The hip should extend all the way up until the base of the tail. hm. well, other than that, the dog sort of leans towards the body of a large felid. so maybe, change it in a few spots to make it look more doggish. okay, i believe i am done. ;)

Krolak · May 2009

GAK04- OMFG THANK YOU!! ;D i was hopeing someone would give me crit soon, let alone such helpful stuff! thankyou SO much!

GAK04 · May 2009

you are very welcome, glad I could help. :D

UnknownDreamland · May 2009

One thing I notice that's consistent is that you give your drawings long, narrow necks. And it doesn't always fit the drawing. c:

Krolak · May 2009

Dreamland wrote:

One thing I notice that's consistent is that you give your drawings long, narrow necks. And it doesn't always fit the drawing. c:

o.o i kinda get what your saying.. xD i am too afraid to try drawing them in a different position yet (i dont think that had anything to do with what you just said but oh well xD)

Krolak · May 2009

<a href="http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk291/krolak12/roughsketch.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk29 ... sketch.jpg</a> yay for failage! D; crit? and its just a sketch so dont be too brutal

Krolak · May 2009

NEWW!! <a href="http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk291/krolak12/firstbanner.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk29 ... banner.jpg</a> crit?

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

i think that the banner is excellent. but then again, i have to go get ready for taekwondo so i cant look into detail but i would buy one.

Krolak · May 2009

femalevamp14 wrote:

i think that the banner is excellent. but then again, i have to go get ready for taekwondo so i cant look into detail but i would buy one.

o__o; seriously!? well... x3 if enough people say that they would buy one.. i might add banners to my post in general services

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

seriously.

they're really cute.

Krolak · May 2009

another quick banner: <a href="http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk291/krolak12/krowbanner.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/kk29 ... banner.jpg</a>

Krolak · May 2009

CallyKats Dachshunds · May 2009

Hunter is very cute. i might have to come steal. lol

Krolak · May 2009

D; nu! hunter is my baby boy

and i'd esplode if anythin happened to him! D< NO STEALING x3

Krolak · May 2009

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Krolak · May 2009

:arrow: ;-; anyone?

Kelsey · May 2009

I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your handwriting. xP

PaperWings · May 2009

<img src="http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r50/0paperwings0/Digital Art/433a3f0a.jpg" alt="http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r50/0paperwings0/Digital Art/433a3f0a.jpg" class="bb-image" /> Looked cute to draw XD But I don't think I did him any justice

Sorry.

Krolak · May 2009

PaperWings wrote:

<img src="http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r50/0paperwings0/Digital Art/433a3f0a.jpg" alt="http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r50/0paperwings0/Digital Art/433a3f0a.jpg" class="bb-image" /> Looked cute to draw XD But I don't think I did him any justice Sorry.

-screams- O_O is that.. HUNTER!? OMFG!! && Thank you kelsey I xDD i dont normally write that neatly

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