ok, so everyone remember Lowell? well, decided on colour. :p

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• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 72.65.212.241

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• Alliieennss

  May 2009 71.95.235.227

  I don't have any critique for the coloring, it's okay, not great, but okay. <br><br>Not sure I like the drawing. <br>The anatomy here is off, I think you should look up some tutorials on the face.<br><br>Please please please try a different style of human art rather than just jumping into anime. <br>Anime is pretty stylized, and should be only for people who have a good grasp of human anatomy. <br>I don't think beginners should ever start out drawing anime, they never really learn basic human anatomy by starting out that way.
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 72.65.219.199

  first, thanks for saying the colouring is decent (im surprised it is)<br>second, i have experience with actual human anatomy, if i take a while i can do a pretty good job, but i'd rather just sketch out things for mi characters. and the eye (which i see is the most messed up) its too far into the middle of the head and his jawline is off, if thats what you mean for the most part with the anatomy.<br>not a beginner, been drawing animals since i was 2 1/2, people since i was about 7, and anime only a year or 2 ago. (im over 12, just for a little bit of reference to mi age)<br><br>if i sound upset or whatever im not, just pointing that out.<br><br>but thank you overall for the crit. and i would like more.

  
  
• Alliieennss

  May 2009 71.95.235.227

  You forgot about the nose and the mouth and the neck. <br>The nose is facing sideways, though the rest of the face is forward. <br>The neck seems a bit too thick. <br>The mouth is slanting. <br>The teeth sticking out is pretty awkward, the canines are bigger than that and would be farther away from each other.<br><br>This looks beginner, thus I will call it so.
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 72.65.219.199

  i think amateur sounds a little nicer maybe? and you're right, i did forget about the nose, i angled it up and forgot to fix it. and i just like the mouth like that. it's just how i draw, but i do know that it's not correct when you're thinking about anatomy. but that's just how it is for me.<br>though, i cant see the neck being too thick...but thats probably just me also.<br><br>btw-i wasn't trying to be ignorant/mean on mi other post.. and i sorry if i offended/whatever else i did to you.

  
  
• Kerry

  May 2009 75.71.190.252

  Resizing your image will make it easier to look at, just something to keep in<br> mind.<br><br>I think you need to work on your lines. They seem kinda sketchy and <br>unclear, almost like you may have been afraid to go near them with color or <br>maybe even have them...(?)<br>I mean lines like this:<br><img src="http://i40.tinypic.com/332347s.jpg"; alt="http://i40.tinypic.com/332347s.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>You definitely need to study some anatomy. The angles on most of the facial<br> features don't quite match up with the angle of your face. <br><img src="http://i39.tinypic.com/2ivxvl5.jpg"; alt="http://i39.tinypic.com/2ivxvl5.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Not the best example, but I think you get my point.<br>I agree with Alliieennss, your neck is a bit too thick.

  
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• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 71.162.27.188

  mi computer kept closing out of ie everytime i tried to resize it so i just gave up. :? and i get it. i couldnt really figure out what would make the lines look better though.

  
  
• Alliieennss

  May 2009 71.95.235.227

  Try using firefox if IE keeps messing up.<br><br>Firefoxes site is Mozilla. <br>It's free and it allows you to block all ads.
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 71.162.21.22

  mi mum is going crazy about how she doesnt want me to get another virus and wont let me on barely any sites. im still trying to get her to let me download gimp. :?