a few things i would like crit on..

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• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 72.65.234.75

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• MondyFlax

  May 2009 75.142.236.106

  the weaslething is cute. =D

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 72.65.234.75

  thanks. me and sam were talking about how we would get like an army of cuteness if they were real.

  
  
• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 71.126.44.109

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• lovefrompaige

  May 2009 71.209.156.139

  <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">For your humans, your chin is too round. You want to make it more inward if you get what I mean..<br>The eyes are wonderful to me!<br>The hair is a little flat.. Its ok but to add more Pi-Zaz, make more layers noticeable. <br>The nose doesn't really fit... Try making it a little bigger for guys and if you want, small for females. <br>If you going to make a small nose, make sure the eyes are big. You have to judge your nose off the eyes..<br>The eyes are on the second one are cute! The first, they go inward.. I don't know if you meant to do that, <br>but if not the maybe straightening them out or putting them in different position would add more emotion and it would be cute. lol<br>I hope I wasn't harsh.. These are things that my friend, Ash has constantly bothered me about.. lol XD<br>You have talent, thats for sure. Just a little bit more practice... ^_-<br><br>All in all, real good!<br><br>- The animal ones are cuties!! </span></span>

  
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• MondyFlax

  May 2009 75.142.236.106

  One other thing that Bobbeh didn't say on the human---<br><br>I think the eye is too far in..like, if there was another eye there showing instead of hair, it'd look weird. >.>.. if you know what I mean.

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
• lovefrompaige

  May 2009 98.145.22.97

  <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Oh yes, Mondy I didn't notice that.. lol You could try inching it a bit over. </span></span>

  
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• CallyKats Dachshunds

  May 2009 72.65.232.63

  thanks both of you, ill keep that in mind.<br><br>about the eye, about the being too far in. i was aiming for his head to be like, not staight on but kind of like..looking to the side or something. but i wasnt sure. :? <br><br>but thank you very much.

  
  
• MondyFlax

  May 2009 75.142.236.106

  Then if it was turned to the side, the chin would also have to be turned. ^.^<br><br>Some pointers.

  i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
  
  love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .