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Crit? :P

edited May 2009 in Artist Alley
Yesh, another anime drawing. I was bored with annotating the stupid Hobbit, so I decided to sketch something. No I can't draw anime, but I try, very hard. XD<br><br>I should take some lessons, no? o:<br><br>Anyways, I'd like crit/comment/whatever you've got. x]<br><br>here it is. :]<br><br><img src="http://i44.tinypic.com/2u7r63b.jpg"; alt="http://i44.tinypic.com/2u7r63b.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Fail, much? I was too lazy to draw the eyes so I just drew her smiling. xD
bluehh.

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  • *steals*<br>I love it :lol:
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  • <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Its sooooo good! :shock: </span></span>
  • @ Buffy; Thanks, lol XD<br><br>@ Paige; o_o; Really? You think so? I just was like thinking "This is fail. -_-"
    bluehh.
  • <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Its simple, I'll give you that, but I couldn't do it in a million years, even if I tried...<br><br>I *fail* at humans... :x </span></span><br><br><br><br><br><br><span style="color:blue"><span style="font-size:34">name isn't paige.. thats me sister. bobcat or caity is me ^_^</span></span>
  • She's pretty (:
    i know you're supposed to cherish life , but this crap isn't paradise .
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    love&&lifegaurds , mondy♥; .
  • Lol, I just like drawing anime and horses when I can xD<br><br>Eh. sorry. D: <br><br>Oh and btw, BobCat, sent the showing contracts.. xD
    bluehh.
  • I could only wish to be able to draw like that :wink:
    --Saved
  • <a href="http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=170543"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://virtualpups.com/index.php?r=vpKennel/view&id=170543</a><br><br><span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Did you send them there, if so, I didn't get them.. :? </span></span>
  • saved09 wrote:
    I could only wish to be able to draw like that :wink:
    <br><br>Thanks! :D<br><br>@BobCat; oops. sent to wrong kennel. stupid mistake once again. -_-
    bluehh.
  • She's veerryy pretty Bluey, fantastic :D <br><br>The only thing that you may want to change is the ear, which I think needs to be up a little higher and more in line with the jawline, rather than the neck. But if you move the ears then they'll be out of line with the eyes, so maybe move those up a bit too? I'm not sure, I can't draw manga any where near as well as you <3
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  • the only thing i can see wrong is the ear also. but instead of moving the ear and the eyes, i think that if you just angled it upwards a little more then it would look like its positioned better.<br>though, i think its looks amazing. i wish i could draw female manga, or even manga with human ears. lol. most of mine have wolf/feline ears. :p
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  • Awww she's adorable! :)
    (SPIDERS!)
  • Mossflower wrote:
    She's veerryy pretty Bluey, fantastic :D <br><br>The only thing that you may want to change is the ear, which I think needs to be up a little higher and more in line with the jawline, rather than the neck. But if you move the ears then they'll be out of line with the eyes, so maybe move those up a bit too? I'm not sure, I can't draw manga any where near as well as you <3
    <br><br>Yay, thank you Mossy! :D<br><br>Hm. I was rather annoyed by the ear, but it was a quick sketch so I just shrugged it off. XD<br>Psh, but Mossy can draw my Distillerie so good <3
    bluehh.
  • @femalevamp14; Hm, thanks for that advice! I'll make sure to do that next time.. but I probably will just cover up the ears :lol:<br><br>@Trianna; Thanks! :D
    bluehh.
  • Nice =D<br><br>Lol, I didnt even notice the ear till I saw comments on it o.o *is blind*<br><br>You draw anime so well ;; You need to teach me :D
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Nice =D<br><br>Lol, I didnt even notice the ear till I saw comments on it o.o *is blind*<br><br>You draw anime so well ;; You need to teach me :D
    <br><br>Shanks Nickel :D<br><br>Lmao XD<br>I do that too o:<br><br>I would teach you.. but I fail. o_o; xD
    bluehh.
  • Omg, I don't know why, but I am in love with that o__o It's simple yet, I dunno, perfect! I wish I could do that but I'm not too good at humans either xD<br><br>Good job, Bluey ^.^
  • DustyVinci wrote:
    Omg, I don't know why, but I am in love with that o__o It's simple yet, I dunno, perfect! I wish I could do that but I'm not too good at humans either xD<br><br>Good job, Bluey ^.^
    <br><br>Perfect?<br>o_o;<br>I see so many mistakes -dies-<br><br>Well. My eyes only see mistakes in my work. x]]<br><br>Yay, shanks Dusty <3
    bluehh.
  • BlueIsis wrote:
    DustyVinci wrote:
    Omg, I don't know why, but I am in love with that o__o It's simple yet, I dunno, perfect! I wish I could do that but I'm not too good at humans either xD<br><br>Good job, Bluey ^.^
    <br><br>Perfect?<br>o_o;<br>I see so many mistakes -dies-<br><br>Well. My eyes only see mistakes in my work. x]]<br><br>Yay, shanks Dusty <3
    <br><br>Lol, I hate how the artist (this applies to me, anyway) always sees the mistakes in their stuff but viewers are like :shock: I never know when my own art is good enough that way xD But yes, yours is excellent ;D
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