Crit? :D [Anime Guy. xD]

EpikLove · April 2009

Okay, so, yesh. I have been drawing anime. For a long time. xD But, I just want some crit on this fan art. [: I -think- this is a scene... maybe.. o_o; I think it's from the 1st or 2nd volume.. anyways it's the baa baa black sheep scene. xD <a href="http://i44.tinypic.com/11t5t6x.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i44.tinypic.com/11t5t6x.jpg</a> It's Earl Cain Hargreaves [little boy form] from the manga, Godchild. And yesh he is holding a sheep! People told me it looked like a mutant goat/dog.

But, I can't draw sheep. T_T Anyways.. crit/comments appreciated.. no stealing. ;P And.. YES I REFFED IT FROM A MANGA SCENE. [at least.. i'm pretty sure i did... I drew this a long time ago people.. xD] BUT. I need critique. And yesh the lines are.... what do you call it... faded? Well, my scanner did that. It was being a butt!

< [And it's a new scanner too! o:]

EpikLove · April 2009

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lovefrompaige · April 2009

My friend Ash has been drawing Anime forever and one thing she always tells me is get the eyes straight..! lol XD In my opinion, I think the eyes are too far apart. Thats one thing you could work on.

Nice drawing. You do have talent. lol

EpikLove · April 2009

lovefrompaige wrote:

My friend Ash has been drawing Anime forever and one thing she always tells me is get the eyes straight..! lol XD In my opinion, I think the eyes are too far apart. Thats one thing you could work on. Nice drawing. You do have talent. lol

Thanks for the crit. ;D I'll take that to heart! I just get really annoyed by the eyes. xD Thank you. o:

Mossflower · April 2009

:O Bluey, I knew you could draw awesomely but I had no idea you could draw that awesomely

He's lovely ^_____^ And the sheep does look like a sheep, more so than mine do anway

rohesia · April 2009

I think it's fantastic :] the only thing I would say to work on, is hands. But then again, I'm rubbish at them myself, so, not sure if my judgement is any good hehehe

Evlon · April 2009

The two bigest problems I can see are that the eyes are way to far apart keep in mind that there is the same amount of space inbewteen the eyes as one eye no more no less. Also there is too much forhead the eyes are dead center in the head so the distance from chin to eye is the same as top of the skull to eyes. Even if he has spiky hair to much forhead. p

EpikLove · April 2009

Mossflower wrote:

:O Bluey, I knew you could draw awesomely but I had no idea you could draw that awesomely He's lovely ^_____^ And the sheep does look like a sheep, more so than mine do anway

o: Thank you Mossy!

My friend told me it looked like half llama... and goat. XD Heehee. Thanks <33

EpikLove · April 2009

rohesia wrote:

I think it's fantastic :] the only thing I would say to work on, is hands. But then again, I'm rubbish at them myself, so, not sure if my judgement is any good hehehe

Thank you! ^_^ Eh. I just hate hands. I try not to draw them. XD

EpikLove · April 2009

Evlon wrote:

The two bigest problems I can see are that the eyes are way to far apart keep in mind that there is the same amount of space inbewteen the eyes as one eye no more no less. Also there is too much forhead the eyes are dead center in the head so the distance from chin to eye is the same as top of the skull to eyes. Even if he has spiky hair to much forhead. p

Okiee. ^_^ Thanks for the constructive crit! I'll try to keep that in mind!

Hm. I need to work on my eyes don't I? xD

EpikLove · April 2009

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DiamondPuppy0809 · April 2009

That is amazing, Bluey! I have -never- understood what the heck Anime and all those characters/drawings were... xD So, I don't normally take interest in this kinda stuff

BUUUUUUT, THAT IS SO COOL!

Doggirl1995 · April 2009

o: I looooooove the hair. It's so awesome!<33 And so is everything else of course. XD Much better than I could do.

oh! and the clothes, are amazing! I can never get all the folds and stuff right, but you did such a good job.

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