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MondyFlax · April 2009

Okay, I got back into poetry again. X3 Black & White Photograph: I sit here, crying in the rain, The rain hides my tears, sooths my pain, As I stare into the darkness, my thoughts only see, The painful memory, Of that wonderful Black & White Photograph, Bringing back memories, Bringing back pain, Bringing back tears, Bringing back hopes, That one day, you shall be here, That one day, I won't be sitting alone in the rain, Betraying my pain, Hiding my tears, With your wonderful Black & White Photograph. Story Behind 'Black & White Photograph'; Last night I had found my family's only photograph of my dog, Gunther, who had died last year, and it happened to be in black and white. It was raining outside, so I went outside, and wrote it on this beautiful flatrock I found, and after that, I stared into the night.

MondyFlax · April 2009

Lost in the End; Don't leave behind what could be true, This could be; me and you Every time you mention her name, I find it as just a sick and cruel game You don't realize what I feel inside, Every feeling for you has merely died, Secrets get you nowhere, don't you see, One thing you just lost; tis be me. I surely am lost, Lost In the end, In the end, The end of hope, End of faith, End of love, Everything shall be lost in the End Of this cruel game. Story behind 'Lost in the End'; My boyfriend had broken up with me for my best friend, who isn't anymore, and I saw them at the park holding hands, so I went home and wrote this, and then he talked about their day to me, I couldn't take it, so I wrote this.

MondyFlax · April 2009

My Land; Words of anger and depression, Through my heart's considerate impression, Every word of trying to apologise, Hiding in every shadow with suprise, I take this hole of burning fire, And bury it with my heart's desire, Putting my final secrets down, Every vowl, every noun, My temper is running low, From this time here, from long ago, With my clinical depression, Too many, so many to question, I think it is my time to go, To leave you all without my final blow, I tis be much happier now, You may ask me how, I cause no more trouble, I shall not make my words redouble, This is only my Destiny, Can't you see, Looking over the horizon, over the sea, Don't forget me, I shall not forget you, Tis be me, Don't you agree, In this shallow land of misory. Story behind 'My Land'; I wrote this because all of my friends were extremely sad, and most of it was because of other people, and then a lot of them were thinking about running away..so I had a brain spark and wrote this.

NickelbackLuver · April 2009

Nice =D They sound good ^^ Just one thing... why were you using "tis"?

MondyFlax · April 2009

Heh thanks. And its just that I always use the word 'tis' instead.. XP

DiamondPuppy0809 · April 2009

Isn't 'tis' supposed to be used only for 'it is' as sort of an abbreviation? xD I don't really know, but it doesn't sound right as "I tis much be happier now."

> It makes me think you're saying "I it is be much happier now" which obviously makes dim sense. xD

MondyFlax · April 2009

I always use 'tis' in those situations.. >_> My sens of speaking is like that. X3 I speak like that in real life too.. so.. o__o

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