<span style="font-size:92">*Please excuse the crappiness of the photo. Was taken with my Dare, so the quality sucks. xD I don't have a scanner, and can't even find my USB for my camera, so yeah. -__-'<br><br><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/2vcalav.png" alt="http://i42.tinypic.com/2vcalav.png" class="bb-image" /><br><br><a href="http://i42.tinypic.com/2vcalav.png" target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i42.tinypic.com/2vcalav.png</a><br><br>There you go.<br><br>Okay, the legs look wrong, so do the hooves, and the anatomy is probably all wrong. I'm kind of a beginner, so yeah. ;P<br>But any critiques are welcome! >D<br>Feed me up with them. I wanna become better at drawing. <br><br>So. Yesh. Enough with my rambling. xD</span>
<span style="font-size:75">It looks pretty good for a cartoon drawing. If it was meant for a realistic drawing, there are some places that need work, but it looks really great!</span>
Things that jump out at me:<br>-The back legs are too slanted inwards, it looks like he just finished doing a sliding stop. Horses stand square, so the legs should be stright up and down.<br>-Rember perspective! The leg closest to you looks longer than the one farther away.<br>-Left foreleg is too far back, it should be just left from the right one. You should only see about 1/2 of it.<br>-Neck is muscled in the wrong place, which isn't incorrect, just means your horse keeps his head up and his nose out while playing/being ridden. Muscle should be almost invisible on the bottom.<br>-Ears are a little small<br>-Chest is too slanted, should be closer to 90 degrees.<br>-Horses have manes as well as a tail, unless the mane was hogged (shaved off)<br><br>I love the head, and your front hooves. The horse looks more like a pony in terms of perportions (sp?), but its cute. I luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurve my ponies.
<span style="font-size:92">Shanks. <br><br>I was too lazy to draw in the mane xDDD.<br><br>So I was like "Let's leave off the mane! " -upload-. xD<br><br>So yeah. <br>But thanks, Ebony, for the crit. ^_^</span>
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