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Drawings for critique! (Ok, fine, i'm showing off, xD)

RacerFastRosyRacerFastRosy
edited February 2009 in Artist Alley
I am in a great art class at school, and the teacher is amazing, both in terms of his art and teaching ability. I don't rememmer if anyone remembers the little eye doodle I put up a month or two ago (I hope no one does, it was... horrible). But I've been working on it a lot, and now I can show off!<br><br>Drawings are pencil, based off of photos. It was just practice for eyes/nose/mouth, (i hadn't finished one mouth so I cropped it out). I was having fun, so I did the shading around one face. Critique is appreciated!<br><br><img src="http://www.freewebs.com/racerfast/- New Folder/SDC10692-1.JPG&quot; alt="http://www.freewebs.com/racerfast/- New Folder/SDC10692-1.JPG&quot; class="bb-image" /><br><br><img src="http://www.freewebs.com/racerfast/- New Folder/SDC10693-1.JPG&quot; alt="http://www.freewebs.com/racerfast/- New Folder/SDC10693-1.JPG&quot; class="bb-image" /><br><br><img src="http://www.freewebs.com/racerfast/- New Folder/SDC10695-1.JPG&quot; alt="http://www.freewebs.com/racerfast/- New Folder/SDC10695-1.JPG&quot; class="bb-image" /><br><br>-Rosy

Comments

  • jennifer27jennifer27
    75.106.192.38
    Wow very nice. Yeah my art teacher is really good too.
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  • DoggywhispererDoggywhisperer
    70.24.139.149
    I think they are great! I guess I could critique it... um, the lips could be a tiny bit smaller on the first one. Good proportions otherwise though.
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  • tarnishtarnish
    76.188.27.186
    whisperer wrote:
    I think they are great! I guess I could critique it... um, the lips could be a tiny bit smaller on the first one. Good proportions otherwise though.
    <br><br>I like the right eyebrow on the last drawing. These are really neat and it just goes to show that the more you practice the better you get. I wish I could draw realistic like that. :D
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  • Young_NativeYoung_Native
    209.206.169.141
    Wow that is pretty good, better than I could ever do.<br><br> Besides that, I got some crit to give as well. <br><br> I've noticed your eyebrows are of different sizes, or not evenly done, but it isn't quite noticable. Your eyes on the faces are also different. Some have eyelashes, and bigger pupils/irises (sp). On the first drawing, the lines above the lips are at an angle they shouldn't be at. They are more slanted to the left (from what I see), while the woman is looking straight-forward. <br><br> Though that isn't very noticable. Besides those small flaws, I believe you have great potential. :wink:
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  • RacerFastRosyRacerFastRosy
    24.196.81.165
    Thank you all very much!<br><br>Eyebrows and eyelashes and I don't really get along... I've got to practice those.<br><br>
    Young_Native wrote:
    On the first drawing, the lines above the lips are at an angle they shouldn't be at. They are more slanted to the left (from what I see), while the woman is looking straight-forward.
    <br><br>Thanks for pointing that out, I hadn't noticed, but I see what you mean now. We are working on our final portraits in class right now, so I'll have to make sure I take care of that.<br><br>Thanks!<br>-Rosy
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