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My sad little doodles

edited January 2009 in Artist Alley
So I was just doodling, and then I decided to put it up here for some critique.<br><br>I need to stress though! My camera and my scanner are out of commission. I had to resort to the cell phone, which means that the quality is horrible!!! So, critique the art, not the blurriness please!<br><br>Little 3-D cube/pyramid thing:<br><img src="http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/018/e/a/ea5d81c302be94bbe79ac8806665f47b.jpg"; alt="http://fc07.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/018/e/a/ea5d81c302be94bbe79ac8806665f47b.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>3-D Window Cube<br><img src="http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/018/f/6/f637fd88a461f617b0dfb38c85a13897.jpg"; alt="http://fc00.deviantart.com/fs41/f/2009/018/f/6/f637fd88a461f617b0dfb38c85a13897.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>An eye. This is where I really need critique. Do I even have the shape right? I have <span style="font-style:italic">no</span> idea where to go from here.<br><img src="http://th06.deviantart.com/fs40/300W/f/2009/018/7/5/Eye_by_flowerpower83.jpg"; alt="http://th06.deviantart.com/fs40/300W/f/2009/018/7/5/Eye_by_flowerpower83.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br><br>Thank you!<br>-Rosy

Comments

  • I really like the first one :o
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  • I like to draw 3d boxes when I am bored too! *highfive* I agree with cybe..I likes the first one :3
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  • I likes the first one :D
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  • Thanks! These are from after some standardized testing the other day :D .<br><br>(Actually, I don't think I was allowed to take my scratch paper out of the room, but this is all I had done on it, so I don't think they mind.<br><br>I can't really draw, so I use a ruler.<br><br>-Rosy
  • the eye, ok i am no genius at drawing eyes, but eye lashes (if you plan to add them...) remember that they curl up, and if it's a "head on" drawing, they are curled toward the ends, and straight in the middle. Um, the pupil is always the hardest part for me, so I'm not sure what to tell you for that other than to center the iris and pupil toward the center, but don't make it like a full circle in the mddle of the eye if you know what i mean
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  • Don't forget, for the eye, to have the eyelashes! And the lower eyelid. Also, there is always one or two little wrinkles below the lower lid, slanting slightly downward from the eye; no matter the age of the person!
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  • I draw eyes all the time I'm not that good of an explainer so I will explain and draw onw for you xD Well the circle that is outside the pupil dosent touch the bottom of the eye outline so that means that the circle outside needs to be a quater under the eyelid. and I think thats about it, and everyone else has covered what I was going to say<br>P.S my pic might explain it easyer! <br><br>Its a bit blury: <br><br><br><img src="http://i41.tinypic.com/2e33b08.jpg"; alt="http://i41.tinypic.com/2e33b08.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Hope it helps! :?:
  • Yes! Thank you very much everyone! That's great Jailo! I hadn't even decided if it was a left or right eye, so I had no idea where to go from there.<br><br>Thank you so much!<br>-Rosy
  • Thats fine! You got the shape and basic structure of the eye right! :D
  • Well basically, eyes are a complete circle. Not an oval, so a lot of people who try to draw eyes at first, do them wrong. The oval is the eye structure, but people seem to forget the eye is still a circle, and sits under the eyelids.<br>Theres visible tissue in your eyes, that would take up the space on the inner side of the eyes.<br>The other side just looks like a angled piece of skin.<br>Look at your own eyes in a mirror to see what your doing wrong ;)<br>Seems like the easiest thing to do to me. :D
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