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Opinions, please.

XxKyliexxXxKyliexx
edited January 2009 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-weight:bold"><img src="http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f60/xoky/group.png"; alt="http://i45.photobucket.com/albums/f60/xoky/group.png"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>I put it up for auction and didn't get one bid.<br><br> I drew them on paint.<br><br>I am looking for some constructive critizism, nothing mean please.</span></span>
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  • AlliieennssAlliieennss
    71.95.2.248
    The cat looks okay, though it's paw is a little awkward, maybe not have it spreading out it toes? <br><br>The dog looks pretty okay, also, though it's arm looks a little long and strange. The arm has bones, in this it looks like there's no bones. Maybe straighten it a little? Make the bottom line on the arm parallel to the top line on the arm? The top line makes an arch while the bottom lines stays pretty straight, making it seem strange.
  • XxKyliexxXxKyliexx
    24.91.132.100
    Alliieennss wrote:
    The cat looks okay, though it's paw is a little awkward, maybe not have it spreading out it toes? <br><br>The dog looks pretty okay, also, though it's arm looks a little long and strange. The arm has bones, in this it looks like there's no bones. Maybe straighten it a little? Make the bottom line on the arm parallel to the top line on the arm? The top line makes an arch while the bottom lines stays pretty straight, making it seem strange.
    <br><br><span style="font-size:75"><span style="font-weight:bold">Thank you, I'll have to fix that. =D</span></span>
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  • VerwirrungVerwirrung
    98.222.219.128
    I would fix the dogs face the wiskers(or somthing) look to big.
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