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Please Critique and give tips. Be harsh!

Juke2Juke2
edited December 2008 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:200">Please Critique and give tips. Be harsh!</span><br><br>I can handle it! D: Made these two, each took about an hour. >.<<br><br>1:<br><img src="http://i42.tinypic.com/2i70dn8.jpg"; alt="http://i42.tinypic.com/2i70dn8.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>2:<br><img src="http://i44.tinypic.com/14y636a.jpg"; alt="http://i44.tinypic.com/14y636a.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>3:<br><img src="http://i40.tinypic.com/fuxob9.jpg"; alt="http://i40.tinypic.com/fuxob9.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>Please comment/critique/give tips! :]
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  • woodpeckerwoodpecker
    84.64.219.136
    well.. i cant actually find anything wrong with them :) can you teach me? not to go off the point im going to be extreme at looking... this may make it look better.. or it may make it look worse.. but on baner 3 you cut off a bit of his head.... maybe if you just made all of that bit slightly transparent.. but totally amazing!
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  • rohesiarohesia
    75.156.203.33
    number one- sort of looks like you tried to go for a replica of Karissa's but aside from that, uhm. mebbe you could stray from curves and all that, and just focus on the skin area, because his jacket wasn't that blue. I may have hated the film, but I do know it was never that light.<br><br>number two is brilliant love, I'm trying to find anything wrong with it... be back in a tick, once I've gone onto the next one which is number four- no..... three. (haha who quote. I am brilliant)<br><br><br>number three- blending. you really, really need to work on blending in this one, love, emmett's head is a bit oddly placed, and he's half decapitated, so... I suggested some sites for tutorials on jazz's contest thread, but no links are provided, so I'm afraid you'll have to google them
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  • Juke2Juke2
    68.192.173.178
    rohesia wrote:
    number one- sort of looks like you tried to go for a replica of Karissa's but aside from that, uhm. mebbe you could stray from curves and all that, and just focus on the skin area, because his jacket wasn't that blue. I may have hated the film, but I do know it was never that light.<br><br>number two is brilliant love, I'm trying to find anything wrong with it... be back in a tick, once I've gone onto the next one which is number four- no..... three. (haha who quote. I am brilliant)<br><br><br>number three- blending. you really, really need to work on blending in this one, love, emmett's head is a bit oddly placed, and he's half decapitated, so... I suggested some sites for tutorials on jazz's contest thread, but no links are provided, so I'm afraid you'll have to google them
    <br><br>the first one was trying to make a replica of karissa's. i have three tries. >.< they all suck. the second one was done in about 10 minutes. the third. well. . . . i have no idea how to blend. >.< i was just using a frame. but i will definetly hit up some of those tutorials. :] thanks!
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  • Juke2Juke2
    68.192.173.178
    woodpecker wrote:
    well.. i cant actually find anything wrong with them :) can you teach me? not to go off the point im going to be extreme at looking... this may make it look better.. or it may make it look worse.. but on baner 3 you cut off a bit of his head.... maybe if you just made all of that bit slightly transparent.. but totally amazing!
    <br><br>I'd be happy to help you. I use Photoshop Elements 6.0. what program do you have?
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