okay, here goes : )<br><br>I'll probably add more in the morning because its 2:32am, and I seriously doubt my eyes are working well enough to spot much. forgive me for any spellign errors, too, because I'm falling asleep here...<br><br><br>okay. first, I think the top line should be a bit more visible- I had to go down to read what it said in the very faint part, where it says candles and lit.<br><br>second. the bold text should never ever ever be plain. if it's that visible, it should be fancy. examples<br><br><img src="http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z104/AniMe_FaN_89/signatures/bellatrixsig.jpg"; alt="http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z104/AniMe_FaN_89/signatures/bellatrixsig.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>to<br><br><img src="http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z104/AniMe_FaN_89/signatures/bellarixsig2.jpg"; alt="http://i189.photobucket.com/albums/z104/AniMe_FaN_89/signatures/bellarixsig2.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>the second came to be after I received some harsh critique from my friends, on the first. see what I mean about opacity, bold text not being plain, etc?<br><br>third. you may want to look at some blending tutorials. try to avoid using the eraser as much as possible, or it can really take away from the piece. again, I refer to the two exaples above, and as you can see in the blending (on both) there is miimal eraser. use the lassoo tool mostly, and set it to a feather of 20px.<br><br>fourth. you may also want to play with the colour and contrast/curves on the actula photos, to. <br><br>that's all I've got for now. <br><br>anyway, like I said, it realy is good, and ido leik it, im jus nitpiking,,,<br><br><br><br>*falls aslepe at keyboard*<br><br>agian, sorry for numerous spelling mistakes
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I agree with Rose's points and stuff. Especially with the top text. I'm not that crazy about the font itself, and it's a little too much goin on. >.< Not that I'm any better. Maybu I should take some of those tutorials ro. Nice job though, except I don't like it that much when people take like 5 shots from the same scene.
gah, I didn't mean to hurt your feelings! you -did- ask for both, love. I told you I thought it was good, and I was only nitpicking at it, trying to help you to make it the best that it can be! constructive criticism and what not. I'm sorry, hon, truly I am!. if you'd like to still improve though, and take some of my pointers, I can tell you of a few tutorial sites, over PM if you'd like
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<span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:blue">Tis alright. I get where you were coming from and I had reasons for the way I did the banner... I felt that if I were to back up my side, with the eraser and the font on the top and main font on the bottom, I would just be whinnying... So I took it and just took the banner down. Butter, pm me and I'll show you. Its not a big deal. I did ask for it. So thank you. </span></span>
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