First Drawing, Critique?

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• DaneLover

  December 2008 24.177.131.25

  Any comments? :arrow:

  
• lovefrompaige

  December 2008 71.38.121.234

  Hehe, its super cuteee!

  
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• DaneLover

  December 2008 24.177.131.25

  Thanks

  
• lovefrompaige

  December 2008 71.38.121.234

  If you want critque then..... Hmmm...<br><br>I would work on making your dog sit straight. It looks slanted.<br>Then maybe the paws... They are box like. Try to make them curvyer...<br>But I don't know if that is your style. :? <br><br>All in all, I love the eyes and the hair gives it a personality! <br>Very cute!

  
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• Doggirl1995

  December 2008 24.70.95.205

  <span style="font-size:75"><span style="color:#ff00d2">Aww. I want to hug it!<br><br>Just something I notice is how the head is at a level angle.. and then the bottom half isn't. o.o<br><br>But you did a good job ;3</span></span>

  
  Thanks for the lovely banner, Nickel
• DaneLover

  December 2008 24.177.131.25

  I realized that he was crooked after I got done drawing him. And I will try to make the paws curvier in the future, I think that will make him look better.<br><br>Thanks

  
• UnknownDreamland

  December 2008 96.234.184.164

  <span style="font-size:75">Kinda huge file of some tips. xD Hopefully you can read my sloppy writing.<br><br><img src="http://i34.tinypic.com/35ddjrk.png"; alt="http://i34.tinypic.com/35ddjrk.png"; class="bb-image" /></span>

  
• DaneLover

  December 2008 24.177.131.25

  Wow! Thanks alot Dreamland