Jasper's Art Dump

Jasper · December 2008

I haven't put any of my newer drawings up here in a long time and I want to see if any of you who knew before think I have improved at all ^.^ All I have are linearts for now I just got Photoshop recently and I haven't played around with it much. Here is the most recent drawing I did yesterday. Its my silly dog Cody playing around. He does this weird pose after a bath or when hes really hyper and it always makes me laugh. <a href="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24/jasper_899/Codygoofingoff.jpg?t=1228277097"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24 ... 1228277097</a> And this was made a while ago, but its still one of my newer ones. I think I might turn it into a new Fursie for next year: <a href="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24/jasper_899/newfursiemaybe.jpg?t=1228277620"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24 ... 1228277620</a> *New* <a href="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24/jasper_899/walkingwolf.jpg?t=1228357811"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24 ... 1228357811</a> Critiquing is always welcome

Thanks, Jasper

Alliieennss · December 2008

Yes, I see much improvement x333. Still have some problems with eye placement, you crazy woman xD.

Jasper · December 2008

Alliieennss wrote:

Yes, I see much improvement x333. Still have some problems with eye placement, you crazy woman xD.

Woot! But you have already told me a million times x3 I know D= I needs help. xD

Alliieennss · December 2008

AND I'LL KEEP TELLING YOU MILLIONS OF MORE TIMES 'CAUSE THAT'S HOW FAST YOU ARE IMPROVING. Look at that caps lock, that means I'm serious. I don't know how to help, I do it just by judging what looks right to me. Use reference?

Goldy · December 2008

dang you open for commissions? both are wonderful! but yes, improvement for sure

lovefrompaige · December 2008

Extremely good and Yes improvement! I've seen your work before...

I like your paws... lol

TashaWasha · December 2008

Definitely see improvement.

First picture critique - eye placement is off (as you already know [looking for a tut now]) - Back ear should be shorter than the the front ear That's about all I can see for that picture, other than the lines in the backleg looking a little off a bit. Second picture critique - extended back leg has somewhat of the same problems as the first That's about it. I love the way you do your paws and hair. ^^ Not sure if what "I" consider critique was any help but I tried. ;P

NickelbackLuver · December 2008

I love them =D I didnt even notice the eye until I read the other comments

I especially love the 2nd one though :P

DustyVinci · December 2008

Yeah, same as Nickel. I didn't notice the eye until I saw the comments. Excellent drawing! Do you use a tablet? And I like the first one best

Kazuko · December 2008

xD They're decent, but as has been said, the eye placement could use some help. <a href="http://i36.tinypic.com/2r6id8l.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">You didn't ask but I did a quick redline anyway</a>

Jasper · December 2008

Paranoid Thoughts wrote:

dang you open for commissions? both are wonderful! but yes, improvement for sure

I might consider it it depends on what you want drawn ^.^ Thank you.

Jasper · December 2008

lovefrompaige wrote:

Extremely good and Yes improvement! I've seen your work before... I like your paws... lol

<3 thanks. o__O its taken me forever to get my paws right I'm so glad I got them down. Now its that eye placement x3

Jasper · December 2008

Koshi wrote:

Definitely see improvement. First picture critique - eye placement is off (as you already know [looking for a tut now]) - Back ear should be shorter than the the front ear That's about all I can see for that picture, other than the lines in the backleg looking a little off a bit. Second picture critique - extended back leg has somewhat of the same problems as the first That's about it. I love the way you do your paws and hair. ^^ Not sure if what "I" consider critique was any help but I tried. ;P

Thanks for your critique. I will be sure to remember that when I draw my next wolfeh

Jasper · December 2008

Nickelback__Luver wrote:

I love them =D I didnt even notice the eye until I read the other comments I especially love the 2nd one though :P

lol Thanks. I think I will star using my real dogs as a ref for the eyes xD

Jasper · December 2008

DustyVinci wrote:

Yeah, same as Nickel. I didn't notice the eye until I saw the comments. Excellent drawing! Do you use a tablet? And I like the first one best

Thank you. And I just got a tablet recently and I've played around with it a few times but never drawn anything presentable with it yet x3

Jasper · December 2008

Kazuko wrote:

xD They're decent, but as has been said, the eye placement could use some help. <a href="http://i36.tinypic.com/2r6id8l.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">You didn't ask but I did a quick redline anyway</a>

Yeah I will go find a good tut to help me out. ^.^ Thank you for the red line

Jasper · December 2008

New drawing x3 Did it in English lol should have been doing my work. Ohh well. <a href="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24/jasper_899/walkingwolf.jpg?t=1228357811"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24 ... 1228357811</a>

Alliieennss · December 2008

I love it's foreward facing snout, you did it so well, it's an improvement of the old way you used to draw them x3.

Jasper · December 2008

Line art for Paranoid: <a href="http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24/jasper_899/Paranoidswolfline.jpg?t=1228555141"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i244.photobucket.com/albums/gg24 ... 1228555141</a>

UnknownDreamland · December 2008

Awman. Cody does that thing? Thank goodness. I thought Bella was the only one. xD < 3

Jasper · December 2008

Dreamland wrote:

Awman. Cody does that thing? Thank goodness. I thought Bella was the only one. xD < 3

Haha Yeah he does. Hes a silly dog. He also sleeps on his back like a human People tell me that dogs can't do that, but he does o__O

ParanoidThoughts8 · December 2008

i love the first drawing of your dog playing. Its ADORABLE jasper!

Jasper · December 2008

lolo wrote:

i love the first drawing of your dog playing. Its ADORABLE jasper!

<3 Thank you xD that be Cody. Hes so inspiring. I'm going to draw another one of his goofy poses tomorrow x3

ParanoidThoughts8 · December 2008

I love to draw my own dogs, because i'm so used to seeing them. I rarely even have to use a ref picture, because I see them every day. I always have the picture in my mind

Jasper · December 2008

lolo wrote:

I love to draw my own dogs, because i'm so used to seeing them. I rarely even have to use a ref picture, because I see them every day. I always have the picture in my mind

I know what you mean. I have 2... 3 dogs and all have different types of coats and their build is different so it makes drawing different breed so much esier and I used them alot for the paws especially.

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