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Afraid to Crash (Poem)

reina__reina__
edited November 2008 in Artist Alley
I like writing poems. I just wrote this one.. took me about 8 minutes or so.. dedicated to Levi, Melissa, Trevor, Brett, and Jarvis, who all died younger than 16 from car crashes.<br><br><img src="http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s167/convinceyou/Hello-1.jpg"; alt="http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s167/convinceyou/Hello-1.jpg"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>© Reina Wishart 08<br><br><br><span style="font-size:75">I'm actually publishing this poem under copyright.<br>Please do not redistribute it without my permission.</span>
"war cry" presas canarios, aryan molossus, and cao.

Comments

  • lovefrompaigelovefrompaige
    71.209.130.128
    I like it :D
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    m y . p h o t o b u c k e t . a c c o u n t
  • NickelbackLuverNickelbackLuver
    69.141.80.206
    lol, Im not much of a fan of rhyming at the end of every line.. but you did a good job with it ^^<br><br>I love the concept, and the ending. It is sad when things like this happen :(
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • reina__reina__
    66.183.125.97
    Thanks.. I know.. it was extremely heartbreaking even though I didn't really know them. Jarvis went to my school and I didn't really notice him until I saw the picture hanging the next day after he died. He was driving his mom's car with only his learner's licence.. and it was slippery and going too fast and hit a tree. :( <br><br>Thanks for the compliments.<br>I like doing rhyming.. I find (with me) it has more.. swing I guess. Even though this poem really has no poetic ... swing. Whatever it's called. :lol: 8)
    "war cry" presas canarios, aryan molossus, and cao.
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