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Poetry
<span style="font-weight:bold">Fated Sorrow</span><br><br>Silver Eyes Cross the Field<br>A Reflection of betrayal <br>Shadows them with red<br><br>The Moon’s over casting Portrayal<br>Of hope Long since past<br>Catches the silver glint<br><br>A sigh escaping his mouth<br>A fated defeat from the start<br>The serenity holds no peace,<br>Of the pain within his heart.<br><br>A cry of sadness from within,<br>Not present on the outside<br>A Remorseful Tear Held back<br>For those who will never be forgot.<br><br>A battle to which he knew was a loss,<br>Still shadows him every day<br>A painful memory of sorrow,<br>For the day he had brought about<br><br>For all those he had included<br>When he should have been alone<br>A melancholy remembrance<br>Of the time he held on to her,<br><br>It was her last day. <br><br><br><br>Ok, so this is a poem made for my story. I don't post my stories online, but this poem reveals little to nothing, so I think it's a good way to show my characters personality a little ^^ I'm not -that- great at poetry, but I tried anyway.<br><br>This is a poem for my character Crevan. It pretty much puts the loss of his 'girlfriend' into a much shorter perspective. I say 'girlfriend' because they never oficially get together, but.. they should have ^.- I dont know that I will -actually- have her die or not, but.. this would be a 'what if' type of thing.<br><br><br>Thanks for reading 
Critique is appreciated.
Critique is appreciated. All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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