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Midnight To Sunrise (Writing)

edited August 2008 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-style:italic">If any of you remember, I used to have an RPG called Midnight To Sunrise. I got the idea off of an idea I had for a story... and well, I finally decided to write it out =D Obviously it won't have the same characters (aside from my main) xD <br><br>I wanted to do this so I could post it on DeviantArt so people didn't think all I knew how to do was one-shots xD. <br><br>I tried posting another story on here before this one.. but I think this one is more well written, and I'd rather put one up that I have a little more confidence in ^^<br><br>There are many stories and such you could find with people with special powers or abilities and I realize that.. but that's pretty much why Im using this one to post online. Im nervous about posting my writing online, but since this was pretty much just a fun idea for a story, I decided it'd be alright to put it online.<br><br>Here's the Introduction, and I'd like to know if anyone would like to hear more. :) Critique is wanted, as Im still going through writer's block and I'd be amazed if this even sounds decent. Im not rereading it until after it's posted though... so I dont decide it's horrible and not post it =D Only reason Im writing this, or posting this is so I can get critique on my writing. :wink: </span><br><br><br><span style="text-decoration:underline"><span style="font-weight:bold">Introduction</span></span><br><br>I knew my life would never be the same; if there was a way of being the same. The second my parents agreed on me going away for the summer, I knew I would be changed forever. This dream I had been living for the past three years would soon come into focus. The one thing I wished to gain this summer was learning who I am. It turns out, I learned that along with other important points in life I had been ignoring.<br><br> The morning I was to leave, I remember one thing clearly; saying goodbye. My parents wished me luck, and reminded me to keep in touch. I had never been away longer than a week, and that was only to a relative’s house. This time I left for the summer to a place where I would be living with strangers in a place I didn’t know. As my dad drove me to the place to which I would be picked up by a bus, I took one last glance at my home, while fighting tears back.<br> <br>“You’ll be alright. This will be good for you, everyone there will understand what you’re going through better than we could,â€
All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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Comments

  • I luff it.<br><br>You going to be a writer when your older?
  • Thanks ^^ I hope I can be a writer someday :)
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • Nickel....<br><br>That was...<br><br>AWESOME-NESS. o_0;;<br><br>xDD<br>Now Bluey ish inspired to write a story.. -runs off-<br><br>:D
    bluehh.
  • OMG...that was like, a novel. xD It's like, I wanna know what happens next! XDD
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    10.31.10 ❤
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  • Thanks ^^<br><br>I hope to write the next chapter up soon, less rushed though, so it may take a couple days ^^
    All good things must come to an end. All endings will begin new good things.
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  • ah, i remember this RPG. I thought the name sounded familiar.<br><br>I love this story. I think it is very good actually, can't wait to read more.<br><br>I'm not much of a book writer person, so I don't have any crits or advice to help. Sorry..but you can ask Sylverwynd. He could probably help.
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