Boz's Fursona.

GAK04 · August 2008

Well, i entered Boz's contest on the contest and community events part of the VP forums and So i made the fursona and here is the outcome. <img src="http://i34.tinypic.com/2w6ulvr.png"; alt="http://i34.tinypic.com/2w6ulvr.png"; class="bb-image" /> overall, i like it. I love the stance how the front of the animal is bigger as it is closer to the 'camera' compared to the back of the animal. I also like the colors. Another thing i like is the background, especially the moon. Some things i don't like. The lineart could be better. it's a little messy. The eye just looks a little weird to me. The muzzle also looks weird. And then the wings. They can just burn. The are to blury/ghost like. But it was my first time trying wings on the computer-so i guess they are sort of good. :?

BuffyBoarding · August 2008

Critique? Okay... buffy is not an artist... but wants to critique anyway.. The muzzle as said does look a little weird. i dunno why. just does. The wings. i think are very very nice. The way the blue "Glows" is really cool as well. Toe nails could have been kept a little more in the lines The background is very cool. Overall Very nice in my oppinion

ParanoidThoughts8 · August 2008

Can i red line to show some mistakes?

GAK04 · August 2008

yes go right ahead. i need some improving, so please people tell me what is wrong/or what is fine..

Mossflower · August 2008

I like the pose

Overall I think it's very good, though the muzzle could be fixed a little bit :P I'm sure Lolo will show you in her redline, but I think it's because you've draw the head from more of a front on-slightly-sidish view, but the muzzle looks like it's been drawn side on

ParanoidThoughts8 · August 2008

The only parts I wanted to line was the head, Thats where the most problems were. Eye- Just move it up, and make it a bit smaller.

Muzzle- Shorten it a bit, and make it point up rathen than slant downwards. I few other notes. Paws- The basic shape isnt perfect, paws are hard though. So just practice them. Exspecially in this position they're hard to draw! xD Ears- I think the positioning of the ears is fine, Maybe just practice those too. <a href="http://i36.tinypic.com/eiv91w.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i36.tinypic.com/eiv91w.png</a> * Study dog anatomy and look for all the main joints in the breed of dog you want to draw, To make sure everything bends in the right spots.

DiamondPuppy0809 · August 2008

I have no clue how to make those, so, over all... terrific job!

Howdy, Stranger!

Boz's Fursona.

Comments