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Critique?

edited July 2008 in Artist Alley
<span style="font-size:75">Okay, well Bluey just learned how to color, by Kazuko. :3<br>[Thank you ^^]<br><br>Anyways, I had a Great Danel lineart from Evlon I purchased, and decided to color it.<br>I just colored it gray. xDDD<br><br><img src="http://i33.tinypic.com/21k07wp.png"; alt="http://i33.tinypic.com/21k07wp.png"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>DO NOT steal it. ^^<br>I would like critique and comments on it.<br>Yes, it is messy, I know that. :roll: <br><br>Credits :<br>Lineart by Evlon.<br>Coloring by Bluey.</span>
bluehh.

Comments

  • You should shade it a little, so the coloring wont look so flat.
  • Yes...<br>I know :3<br>I can't figure out how to do that yet though xD<br>I just learned today. ^^
    bluehh.
  • Oh, it's not hard ^^. Just a use a darker color of the color you used. But never use black to shade on a colored (blue, red, yellow) dog. <br>Put some shading on the legs farthest away from the "camera", a little under the head, and some on ears. You can put a little anywhere, like on the line on the tummy, and on the line by the hind leg. It doesn't have to make sense for now, it's just to make the coloring less flat ^^.
  • Oh, it's not hard ^^. Just a use a darker color of the color you used. But never use black to shade on a colored (blue, red, yellow) dog. <br>Put some shading on the legs farthest away from the "camera", a little under the head, and some on ears. You can put a little anywhere, like on the line on the tummy, and on the line by the hind leg. It doesn't have to make sense for now, it's just to make the coloring less flat ^^.
    <br><br>-did not register what she just said-<br><br>xDD<br>Don't worry, its hard teaching me. xD
    bluehh.
  • xDD okay, I'll do a quick example in paint.
  • if your just starting...<br>try the dodge/burn tool<br>(you use gimp i assume)<br>dodge makes things lighter, burn makes things darker<br>set opacity(or maybe strength in gimp?)<br>to like 20-50<br>use burn where darker areas would be(where sun doesnt hit)<br>and dodge where it would be lighter(closest to the light source)
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  • lolo wrote:
    if your just starting...<br>try the dodge/burn tool<br>(you use gimp i assume)<br>dodge makes things lighter, burn makes things darker<br>set opacity(or maybe strength in gimp?)<br>to like 20-50<br>use burn where darker areas would be(where sun doesnt hit)<br>and dodge where it would be lighter(closest to the light source)
    <br><br>I use Adobe Photoshop 7. xD
    bluehh.
  • xDD okay, I'll do a quick example in paint.
    <br><br>Thanks for the tut, Alliieennss ^^
    bluehh.
  • well same concept then<br>:)<br>dodge/burn still works<br>when you get better with shading, then start working with actual colors to shade<br>not dodge and burn<br>:)
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  • I see some marks outside the lines. What I do is change the background color to something outrageous like a bright red. It makes it easier to see where you went of the lines. Then you zoom in a lot and take a small brush. It doesn't take long to clean up and it makes the art look coolier! xD
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