Critque Tweak..gah

Comments

• KiteKatsumi9

  July 2008 66.63.86.119

  The only real thing I see is that the line under the mouth is too high up. The lip ring should be above that line, the line shows where the chin starts. ;3 Looking nice though. I like the hood strings

  Bye.
• tarnish

  July 2008 76.188.29.101

  Hm..I had it higher because I didn't want his lip seeming big. The piercing was meant to seem like this <a href="http://tattoo.about.com/library/graphics/bugglip.jpg"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://tattoo.about.com/library/graphics/bugglip.jpg</a><br><br>Thanks Kite. I like hearing the comments.

  
• KiteKatsumi9

  July 2008 66.63.86.119

  That piercing is a little bit above the chin line if you look closely ;3<br><br>I still think you're doing very well and should keep practicing, because you have the potential to become something really great

  Bye.
• tarnish

  July 2008 76.188.29.101

  Oh wait, I see what you are talking about now! Lol. Actually I could fix that really easily with the move tool. So I should move both lines down and the peircing up?

  
• KiteKatsumi9

  July 2008 66.63.86.119

  Just the line under the mouth should go down, and the piercing should go up a bit, yes

  Bye.
• tarnish

  July 2008 76.188.29.101

  Alright. I moved everything up, even the nose. xD I hope this looks better..<a href="http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc278/Skaitie/contest2.png"; target="_blank" class="bb-url">http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc278/Skaitie/contest2.png</a>; I think I could probably put the nose back. I just felt like I had no room. lol.

  
• KiteKatsumi9

  July 2008 66.63.86.119

  Lookin good The nose can move back down, yes, but the mouth situation is looking much better! ^^

  Bye.
• tarnish

  July 2008 76.188.29.101

  Thank you so much Kite! *smooshes*