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anime >.< cirtique

ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
edited July 2008 in Artist Alley
<img src="http://i27.tinypic.com/2po5awm.png"; alt="http://i27.tinypic.com/2po5awm.png"; class="bb-image" /><br><br>i hate doing people...<br>grrr<br><br>BUT LOOK AT HIS PANTS!<br>lol<br>AND HIS HOODIE<br>i love the shading<br>HAHAHAHA!<br><br>critique
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  • tarnishtarnish
    76.188.29.101
    I think the neck is too long or too skinny. With the belt sticking out it doesn't seem like the legs are attached. With a hoodie it would be sticking out more because its bulkier and it almost seems as if it's tucked in.<br><br>Other than that, I think it's good! I love the shading too. :D
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  • spikesspikes
    75.3.2.129
    i like except for the long neck
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  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.67.66
    tee hee<br>ive never drawn a person<br>>.<<br>so its a bit messed up<br>ill improve<br>:D
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  • spikesspikes
    75.3.2.129
    hey are you good at animals
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  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.67.66
    spikes wrote:
    hey are you good at animals
    <br><br>i think so,<br>at times<br>:D
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  • spikesspikes
    75.3.2.129
    can you make me a aussie shepherd giftie
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  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.67.66
    PM me about prices and such
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  • KiteKatsumi9KiteKatsumi9
    66.63.86.119
    The head is too big and the legs are way too short. That sticks out at me the most. *prods with skeleton diagram* His eyes also have no white D:
    Bye.
  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    68.238.67.66
    Kite_Katsumi wrote:
    The head is too big and the legs are way too short. That sticks out at me the most. *prods with skeleton diagram* His eyes also have no white D:
    <br>i tried to add whites..<br>but they looked bad<br>>.<<br>lol
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  • lovefrompaigelovefrompaige
    207.200.116.73
    I love the shading you do!! --- Thats the thing that I have sooooooooooooooooooo much difficulty w/...<br><br>What program do you use? :)
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  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    74.61.214.230
    corel psp x1
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  • JessicaHolmesteadJessicaHolmestead
    66.61.128.246
    I love it =) <br><br>I think you do fabulous art whether its this type of art or banners =)<br><br>its all amazing.
    IF I OWE YOU MONEY FOR BANNERS PLEASE MESSAGE ME I WILL GET THE CONTRACT TO YOU TOMORROW EVENING!!
  • ParanoidThoughts8ParanoidThoughts8
    74.61.214.230
    ahhh thanks!<br>that makes me feel all happy<br>^^
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  • Young_NativeYoung_Native
    207.118.106.34
    Well you got a nice look on Anime but it could use a few good tweaks. <br>Omg he can't hear anything? :wink: Also where is the white part in the eyes, his skin has taken over Oo. and the eye shaping is a little wrong too. Each outline of the eye is shaping to the right while they are suppose to face at each other. The neck looks a little different too, the neck muscle you were trying to show out makes the neck look wrinkly, remember somewhat straight lines are the key. Maybe shrink the neck away a little too. The hoodie is nicely shaded but the hood on back is overlarged and the hoodie seems to look big on him, which means that you need to poof up the hoody unless its tucked away in belt.<br><br> The legs are somewhat out too, the section where the legs finally connect seems off to me. It seems too boxy, maybe make them slowly curve inwards where it would somewhat look like an upside down V. Oh yeah head is a tad bit big for the whole body :wink: . Hope tha thelped!
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    "Discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in New Eyes."
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